The hardwood floors were a good referential symbol.

Also, Correction:
"He moaned softly as Marik's cock finally...way he'd been craving it.": I think it would strengthen the sentence to delete "it" at the end. That was the only error/nit pick I found though. Great story!

I am so thrilled that you decided to write a follow-up of your original story! I absolutely loved it and this as well. You need to get back into writing pronto! lol.

Yay! I love it. And love that you incorporated TunaFax's comment on the original story. I feel like between these two, none of the love scenes are boring, there's always some sort of challenge, or something new that they're exploring. (That, and you come up with awesome ideas for love scenes).

omg! OMG! :D :D Christmas has come early! I did not think my favourite thief fic series would have one heck of an extra story! It's wonderful to have you back on fanfiction ChaosRocket! I am so happy and delighted to have read such an amazing fic! I think your writing style has gotten even better since the last story I read from you too! _
Ughh I'm going to be re-reading this for a long time! I ADORE what you've created between them, and this fic is just so them! I think my heart melted a little when you brought up their first night together after leaving Egypt. It was wonderful to have that small reference in there. I love that they're still doing kinky bets too! XD
I cannot wait for any future projects, and should you have any other website/tumblr/y!gallery account I would love to follow you there too! _
Warmest Regards (and a happy christmas!)
:D x

YEA, A SEQUEL! KINDA! More like an epilogue I guess. I'm excited to see more within this fic verse.

I was amused by how Malik was tease/torturing Bakura the entire time. He would do that shit, no doubt. Always love the Malik topping in thiefship fics. Also, the hardwood floors. I see what you did there.

Great characterization and writing as always. Looking forward to more thiefshipping from you and Taemanaku.