| Reviews for My Brother's Keeper |
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Agent3Novi chapter 11 . 10/14/2018 GOSH DANG THIS IS GOOD~! |
laila chapter 11 . 10/24/2017 this is one of the best undertale fandoms i have ever read! you are really talented and i hope your sick family members feel better |
RinaNikos475 chapter 11 . 5/24/2017 So... close... to the end! I hope you update soon! This is very interesting and I hope its a happy ending! This story is amazing! |
A Stupid Critic chapter 1 . 4/18/2017 I love this chapter, I love how you tied in Sans's natural perspective with the world around him. I love the exposition! |
Grimreapersgolour1 chapter 11 . 5/20/2016 Heh, it's okay, I worry about your family! I hope that they are okay! And I also hope you continue this(a bit less then I should) hehe |
ilovecartoonsgirl chapter 11 . 5/8/2016 Welp, Grillby is a part of the fray now. And geez Gaster, you are a jerk. Though...I guess there is a chance that you can change...Good chapter! |
BabieDove chapter 11 . 5/4/2016 Dont worry! Its amazing! STA and take care of your family! |
shadowcat500 chapter 10 . 3/28/2016 *reads that chapter 11 will be the ending* FUUUUUUUUCK |
Toa Nonny chapter 10 . 3/24/2016 Great story. I look forward to reading more. |
Grimreapersgolour1 chapter 10 . 3/23/2016 I love this story soooo much! Please continue soon! |
urbangirl98 chapter 10 . 3/20/2016 This chapter is intense. Oh wow. Thank you for the update! I was so excited when I saw it had updated, I haven't ever clicked a link so fast xD This chapter pulled at my heart strings. Just... You wrote Papyrus perfectly. And when Frisk tried to reset, I teared up! I have a feeling Gaster is behind this reset problem... I loved all the puns Sans was saying, it is so in character to just joke around when he's scared. Amazing work. You write tension and suspense perfectly! Until next time, Bella |
PoCATo chapter 10 . 3/19/2016 Dun dun dun! |
TheReader578 chapter 10 . 3/17/2016 Heh. Wow. This is amazing. I've read many different stories on how the skelebros "came to be" but this is clearly one of my more beloved ones. The characters. The plot. The- ...well I guess you get my point. Basically, this whole story is nothing short of amazing, I love everything about it, and, well, I hope updates are coming soon. Amazing. soo...um, please update soon? Take care! (And update!) |
FlamingFlyingFoxOfDoom chapter 10 . 3/16/2016 Gaster stop burning buildings. That's rude. Oh...Er... Well as always I love this story and as always I never friggin review because I'm always on my phone and it's hard to type on that thing. Such silly little things I find myself loving. I really like the details you write about the Core-Shutdown Routine. I love Pappy and Sans and I love everyone doing things and i just find this story fascinating and I can't wait for more but at the same time I dread it. Not because I hate reading it because I fear what might happen to Sansy. Sansy. How strange. What a bizarre nickname. Well, can't wait for the next chapter! Good job, buddy ol' chum o' buddy pal! |
PantryMonster chapter 10 . 3/14/2016 Ooh~ I was shivering the entire time while reading this. |