The butterfly wings and the changes it brings

Actually like how you are writing Sasuke and Naruto, it makes it much more real.

I like how you did this time loop, it’s actually well balanced and his growth is understandable as well as not over the top unlike the others hope you pick this back up since I just found your story and I can wait for a update.

You do relise that naruto can never learn genjustu as his chakra stores are way to big even if he was to get his chakra control to tsunade level he would still not be able to use it

This is awesome please update soon.

and I know you said you had some stupid things planned and that but you can always change your plan, or if you don't want to continue or rewrite can you find someone reliable to adopt this story and after they adopt it post a chapter saying who adopted it or something? please

please continue or rewrite, this is the only naruto loop fanfic where Naruto always has to get stronger to beat opponents but doesn't become insanely O.P with infinite power and ability, of course it could do with some work like a bit more realistic results cause honestly there's no reason the thugs should be killing villagers or at least without a reason behind it happening although the village slaughter with Sakura's torture is the only real complaint I have

muscle memory doesn't exactly mean Muscle memory. what I realised by reading alot of loop fanfics is that muscle memory is just remembering how to much in a certain way intinctualy. the only thing not going through would be his muscle ability so say Naruto improved his flexibility, strength, speed, etc. but he would be able to get a taijutsu style down as long as it's within his flexibility to do so and strength and speed isn't necessary needed to learn styles but they are required for them to be effective. and just cause his muscle speed aren't kept the same doesn't necessarily mean he can't speed up, by that I mean if Naruto learns handsigns to and instinctual muscle memory level then he could go through the handsigns at his maximum speed rather then have to slow down to make sure he does them properly

The entire time, I can’t help but feel that this story is saying “I’m gonna make Naruto OP” then the next chapter it yells “SIKE!” by throwing something at Naruto masked under “Naruto figured this out only now after 2 years of training with Shadow Clones”. Not a bad idea, but could definitely do with a revised version. Spelling mistakes every single chapter for one thing. Might want to try and streamline the story so it doesn’t get boring, massive info dumps make a reader just skim it and move on to the next paragraph etc. Also, maybe let someone join the loop. It’s been 30 chapters with Naruto going kinda loopy (pun wasn’t intended). Most Loop fics let people the Anchor of a loop interact with often become aware of the loops. Or don’t. Up to you really.

Muscle memory is a mental thing, he won't get strength but his form should be perfected.

One question to you because you are trying to change something: how in the world does naruto never notices the memory transfer thing, and he is not brain dead or something, this is one of the mysteries that has plagued the original series.

I really love this story. You explain the processes Naruto has to deal with in each loop and what he learns to get stronger. Sometimes it is hard to find a story that is long and entertaining, but also informational. I hope I can write a story with the dedication you have for this one. Also in your Authors notes, I love how you narrow information down so it is easier to understand them. I look forward for the next remaining chapters and probably the future chapters you update. Thank you _

For the physical, yes. But if Naruto had shadow clones go through the katas, maybe one or two, then he would gain the muscle memory.

Ehh the whole mysterious observer thing kinda ruins this for me along with being prevented from moving on if Zabuza dies, I can understand the other stuff such as if naruto failed the tenon test then he couldn't legally try to be a ninja again or a teammate dieing which as far as I know can lead t being placed in leave having the team dissolved if there is no replacements e.t.c.

I will try to continue this. But I really, really, beyond reason. Wish that those using the time loop would not go with the muscle memory thing. Seriously, every time loop story especially groundhog day. Did not affect muscle memory. In fact, the main character in groundhog day learned guitar, piano, singing, engineer, and a whole list of things. So the whole muscle memory thing is starting to be one of those urban legends a false trope. If the loop is meant to improve oneself. How can you if you lose everything. How can he learn a justu or anything? The muscle memory is a plot hole. It always kills the story for me, because it rips you out of it due to the illogical nature of it.

Did you know that Naruto was originally an anime about cooking. That idea obviously didn't work out, and now we have this. Go figure.