It is iligal to shoot for someone else

until the story I liked it rather well but the addition of a clone of asteria then yet another cross over which is not even announced in the summary of the story disgusted and I get very tired of reading this c 'is rather redundant so I prefer not to read the end of the story but I will advise you to stop putting too much nonsense in your story because its really too much.

Boring.

boo! is she still a sadist?

question, how is Thalia already a tree? she's only 5 years older than Annabeth. and then chapter 4 has Luke

I know I'm starting this story pretty... late considering you wrote it about five years ago, but I thought fuck it and wanted to comment that the scene where the Director is (literally) ripped limb from limb reminds me of the scene in Hellsing where the Valentine brother (Luke?) had his legs ripped off and squished in front of him.
That's it I think.
Really enjoying the writing and story so far!
Thanks!

Eeey, brisinger? Eragon, anyone?

Reading that transformation.

That’s cruel mate. Removing the special part.

ooooh, like the ending. totally sets up a new series; war between Asteria's aliens and the predators. it could be an interesting sequel. DO IT! MAKE THE SEQUEL! you could do so much with it.

I wouldve loved the story if you didnt turn percy into a girl. Why not an it.

She hasn't been wearing any clothes for the last 5-6 years? No doubt she doesn't have a clue what being nude in public does to people.

I'm sorry that Max and the others died I really liked that aspect of the story

I wonder if the new percy wil like guys or girls more.

Poor Percy what the director has done to him now her is messed the hell up

Wow so far this story is amazing and I can't wait to see how it turns out in the end. I do not want to imagine a new Percy kicking any guy in the Family Jewels.