Rereading some fan fiction. I love this-truly beautiful. Thanks.

I usually hate Christmas fics, but this one is so incredibly well written and beautiful I have trouble finding words to express how much I love it. Thank you for writing and sharing it, it'll stay with me for a long time.

You got to follow on with this one too

You have painted such a stunningly beautiful picture - as if with pastels, yet warm and vibrant. A perfect Christmas fic. :)

Awesome Christmas story. Perhaps they did : )
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really nice!x3

Good!

Excellent

Oh, this was so beautiful! I love thinking they might have had a respite on their difficult and painful journey. Entirely believable that Jane would decide to go with her both as a gift and so he wouldn't be alone. The way they came together here was graceful and fluid, almost like a ballet. Thank you for this!

This was so lovely. Loved the mist "like stars" in Lisbon's hair, and the whole Lisbon as light theme throughout, particularly at the beginning and the very end. Liked the "show me" line re: cookies. The ice skating and Jane's reflections on happiness were also nice. Loved Lisbon's icy fingers on Jane's neck, and the heat that followed. Really, a lot to love about this. Thank you for writing!

What a great reminder of what is important at Christmas, being loved. Thank you for your gift to the reader. Wishes for health and happiness to you and yours.

Beautiful! Happy holidays and thank you :)

What a beautifully written story. Lisbon's acknowledgement that neither of them are ready, yet her desire to make him feel loved makes this just perfect.

A lovely Christmas gift to read.

Enjoyed this a lot ! thanks for writing ! Happy holidays to you ! I hope you continue writing for the mentalist in 2016 ! Youre great !

Such an adorable story! So perfect a depiction. My only quibble is about Sacramento-I go there a lot because my daughter lives there and it's a wet 50 degree Xmas. But the Chicago part-so good.