| Reviews for The Betrayed One |
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   silvermoonbeamfox0881 chapter 4 . 1/30/2019 CONTINUE! PWEASE? |
| Unknown chapter 4 . 5/21/2018 BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/1/2017 Hey next time instead of using an actual religion make up a fake one because I'm sure this would have been a great story but I stopped reading when you wrote Jahova I am a follower of this religion and did not appreciate seeing him MY GOD projected this way |
| Stygian stapler and JPBBX ftw chapter 4 . 1/12/2017 New chapter please |
| MoonShadowPup chapter 4 . 5/23/2016 moorrrree! this is great! |
| morgandavies2002 chapter 2 . 2/25/2016 keep it up I love it |
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/10/2016 To the author of this story I must say that I like it a lot I didn't think that I would have been into it as much as I thought but now I am keep on doing what you do my friend and ignore any criticism from other people this is one of my favorite fan fics yet. :) from Miguel |
| iampengwing chapter 4 . 1/9/2016 Name: Asper Imagin Gender: Female Godly Parent: Kronos (Demititan) Powers: Control over time Weapons: Syigian iron bow and arrows, stygian iron sword, and celestial bronze dagger Height: 5'3" Age: Real age unknown (immortal) looks 13 Hair and Eye color: Eyes are a molten gold color, hair is white blond withe dark purple streaks.. |
| Kacl chapter 4 . 1/1/2016 Nice story, update soon |
| Kitty425 chapter 2 . 12/31/2015 Chaos Solider Lily Girl Iris able to create rainbows Twilight-a dark purple sword with a silver grip with an amethyst on it (it can transform into a ring) 5ft 10inch 11 Hair- Curly blond, but she dyed the ends the colors of the rainbow Eye- Changes, from red to orange to yellow to green to blue to indigo to violet |
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/31/2015 it's camp counselors (c-o-u-n-s-e-l-o-r-s) not consolers. |
| Matt chapter 3 . 12/24/2015 Hate you for killing Jason, and therefore I'm never going to read this again. |
| nihal chapter 1 . 12/22/2015 Keep up the good work. cant wait to read more:D:D |
| VelocityRaptor chapter 3 . 12/24/2015 Can Chaos bring Jason back? |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2015 Good story. Mind updating like right now? Even if you just published it |
