Reviews for Fledglings
Shelly Torres Skyssa chapter 1 . 4/5/2019
Yeih! I finally (FINALLY) have (a little) time to read this. I loved Nightfall with my heart, and I want to read all of this.

It's a mother's job to worry like that, Valka.
:3/
XD

Sand everywhere!
\:D/

She's adapting to change, I see.

Castles of ashes. Since Valka took almost all the sand. XDXDXD

Bath Time, Little One.

She got lost? Well, it doesn't surprise me. I mean, the nest is VERY big.

Woah! Big imagination of hers.

Oh, Yeah. Try to catch water. Mom said I used to do that a lot.

Yeih! Swimming lesson.

Oh, poor Cloudjumper. And also, poor Valka.

Giant bones?

It's amazing what you do. You write Valka not like we all know her, but how she probably were. She wanted to stop the war, but she was also raised in believing that dragons were thoughtless beasts. She is learning.

Broken Fang is nice.

All that train of emotion she's going through... Wow.

Awwwww, Toothless is so cute.

Scratch that. Those two are so cute. Love them. *HEARTS*

Those last words. Those last thoughts. Bravo!
*Claps*

Loved this One Shot.
Brynn Reaper chapter 1 . 7/27/2018
I'm baaack...
And I decided to start reading in chronological order, so this is where I started.
Valka sure has a lot of stuff to miss. Reading this made me think about how much I don't even think about doing without, because *of course* it will always be there. And she must be lonely. Even with all the dragons, when your two-year-old is the only person you can really talk to (sort of) it's hard.
Hahaha rain getting everywhere. I may have mentioned this before, but for a place where it 'snows nine months of the year and rains the other three', whenever we see Berk in Race to the Edge, it always seems to be sunny :)
Some god answered her prayer... Now who might that be I wonder...
Aww Valka is so protective of Hiccup. I like Valka a lot here. She's so young and alone sometimes, and so frightened for Hiccup, but she's also so strong and brave. It takes a lot to raise a child in a nest of dragons, when you also have to survive yourself. I'm sure the dragons are a great help to her though ;)
I'd be terrified if my toddler was wandering around near cliffs.
Yeah, it's pretty exhausting to live in a world where no one will listen to your ideas. I bet she had some arguments with Stoick over dragons...
Oh no, she shouted at Cloudjumper! Now he's sad... I get the impression her feelings for him are a bit complicated, though positive. She loves him, but...
Silly, Sillier and Silliest. :D Even if she does call them all Triplet. Which is also a great name.
Hahaha. Hiccup is filthy and doesn't want a bath. Toddlers are the same wherever they live, and whoever their friends are.
Ugh, I would hate to get lost in those caves. The idea of being stuck there forever, fumbling around in the dark until you die of thirst or something... Shudders.
That's some interesting stuff Valka gets brought. A single, perfect feather... Whose idea was that? But yeah, being a set of children's clothes would be horrible.
Baby Hiccup in the water is adorable. He's so innocent, with no idea that things are anything other than normal. It makes me feel all comfortable inside :) And Toothless is back! Oh, they are so cute together. Soul-mates from the start. Toothless is such a puppy when he's little. Considering he's more of a cat when grown up, that's funny.
Oh, Cloudjumper. So many feelings for him in this. The pain... Ooh, traitor. I hadn't thought of Valka being considered that before. She's not *against* the people of Berk, I don't think. She just believes they're wrong. Which, you know, they are. But I think she's right, that Hiccup at the Nest might be better than on Berk. He certainly seems happier here.
That would be scary, expecting to be eaten at any moment... Do Vikings actually have any support for the claim that dragons eat humans, or is it just one of those things they believe, like a dragon always going for the kill?
Hahaha dragon taking Hiccup and hiding him with her hatchlings.
Aww baby Hiccup purring. So cute... I wish I could purr. I'm so envious of cats... ;)
Valka tried to build a raft... Oh, she has no chance of getting home in that thing. In any case, I don't think she'd be allowed to just go home like that... But I do feel for her, and her need to pretend that she could go back. I don't blame her for breaking down. Sometimes a breakdown can make you feel better afterwards. Oh Toothless, getting all concerned. He really is the best.
The image of a young Hiccup and Toothless fighting to get in Valka's lap is a wonderful one. And Valka realising that she wouldn't take Hiccup back anyway, because he's happy... So heartwarming.
'she is determined he will not be a dragon' Oh. Um... Well... I think it might already be a bit late for that, Valka.
And her decision to burn the raft and make a new life. I don't know what to say, other than it felt very *right*.
Her statement that they will bring their worlds together was a nice call forward to the end of 'Nightfall'.
So that's that. I'll be back in a few days (probably) to read and review... *checks* Valkyrie Eleison!
Sebine chapter 1 . 5/21/2016
Needs more D:

And a slight AU where Valka survives the trappers
Kas3y chapter 1 . 12/25/2015
This was amazing, I must admit, I had a lil teary moment within this story, and it just made it even more sad knowing Val died but she still eventually got the wish she was hoping for :D Again, an amazing job and I cannot wait till you write more :D
SaiyanPrincess chapter 1 . 12/24/2015
Wow I have said it before and I will say it again I absolutely love everything you write in the Nightfall arc it is seriously my favorite written work ever and one of the top things I love on my life. Your work is always amazing and wonderful! From my very soul I thank you for writing this perfect piece of art
thearizona chapter 1 . 12/23/2015
Nice...not a lot of story's deal with Valka's feelings like this so it was interesting to see it. I think you nailed it right on the head how she would feel if both she AND hiccup had been taken.
Untill next time,
Keep up the fantastic work!
LunarCatNinja chapter 1 . 12/22/2015
Aaaaaaaaaaw! I love it!