This has potential, I would love to see it continued!

It could be better.

I liked the chapter!

And now I can't wait for Taylor to meet Muffet.

I'm really liking this. Great prose, nice thought processes from Taylor, and I can't wait to see where this goes.

Very interesting chapter 1 - I shall follow and watch (just wanted to let you know that for some reason I can't see this fiction which I search through Worm Crossover, the only reason i saw this which because I was searching through Untertale Crossover).

I'm liking this a lot! Please continue!

I've been thinking about what the best Undertale crossover would be, trying to fill certain criteria. Can't believe doing this didn't occur to me, since I'm pretty into Worm fanfic and its community.

This is an excellent idea, because Taylor is ruthless and very different from Undertale's world, but wouldn't just kill monsters. She actively avoids killing. That lets you drive the story forward without worrying about the moral dilemmas you get as soon as the protagonist starts killing. I mean, it was only pulled off in Undertale because it had a silent protagonist.

Not to say stories shouldn't try to tackle the moral dilemma, but it's a lot harder to write, and in my opinion, much less fun to read.

I'm rambling. Basically, I like the story. Taylor and Toriel seem in character, and your writing style shows quality. Most Undertale crossovers I've tried have had prose that just annoyed me, or was clearly subpar. You might be one of the first I've seen do a satisfactory job.

I'm hoping this stays good. If there was one way to ruin this story, it'd be making Taylor too much like the fanon interpretation of her character. I shouldn't be so pessimistic, though.

Can't wait for more. If you ever need a beta, I'm super willing.

not interested in undertale, but your start is 'interesting'.

let's see where you take me...

Seems pretty cool so far. Taylor could take the Undertale story in some interesting directions.

Nice.

Muffet will love her

Well, the Underground is screwed now! Have fun Taylor!

Thanks for the new fic! Looks interesting. Too bad I'll never play Undertale, so this will have to do.

Interesting intro.

Really liking the story in its beginning. Best of luck that you complete it