Hey! Love love LOVE your writing. You asked for ideas, and I have a few! Maybe starvation? Like held captive for too long or maybe he was starved intentionally? And poison.

Omgggg sooo gooood! I know you are probably busy, but can we expect another update soon?

ok is there every going to be an explanation for that projection?
also, following now. This was great and I think this one was my favorite chapter. v

I really really like this! I can’t wait for you to finish! I loved his reaction to finding out bruce was batman hha

Please please pleaseeee write more!

YES! This was so good! I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm always absolutely AMAZED by your writing. I hope anyone reading the reviews trying to decide whether or not to read this does, and gets as hooked on Iron Woobie's stories as I am. Love ya!

YAAAAAAAASSSSSSSS oh so good so good so good! It was so dang genuine and those two little nerds just pull at my heart! I'm also familiar with scriptmedic, Aunt Scripty is so helpful. Looking forward to more in the future. Welcome back, my friend!

I meant outlier* whoops

I Kinda don't want you to update outsider… Because then I have to reread the first 19 chapters XD

Omfg ur baaaaack!

I squealed when I saw the email that this was updated! I love this little series and have been looking forward to an update! :)) Thank you so much for posting! As always, I love your writing style and can't wait to read more from you!

It's great to see you posting again. You really capture the voices of Dick and Wally and a lot of other characters really well. And it was great to see this little look into the origins of Dick and Wally's friendship.

I think you might be right. I never really gave it much thought before, but Dick and Wally do have extremely different backgrounds. Just finding common ground to build a friendship on must have been weird for them, especially since they only really would've seen each other 'on the job', at least at first.

Wow! This is really cool! I love it!

I love this! I hope you continue :)

How entertaining. I do look forward to your next update of the many misadventures of Wally being knocked unconscious. Perhaps something more bizzare like a string of bad luck where he just keeps getting unlucky and finally has something as basic as a string trip him, rendering him unconscious?
Eh, it's up to you.