Aragorn sounds more like a school aged child (not pre school) then a toddler.

Aragorn sounds way to old for a 2 year old child. He sounds more like a child of 13. Was he meant to be an older child?

How old was Aragorn in this story? I think he was way too mature for a toddler. A two year old could never have that kind of understanding more be that brave.

The story is well written. I think that Elrond is out of character though. This is the first story that I read that he was reluctant to take him in or to love him. I also think that Aragorn is a bit mature for a two year old child. I'll read more chapters to make sure.

I like how this is a different take on things and how certain things work out. Interaction between estel and elrond and legolas was the best though arwen's was good too. However i'm not sure if i like this one enough to say that 'yes i like it.' It was good, but not brilliant.

Wow.

really cool! update? PWEASE?

you made a mistake in Elrond's appearence. Mithril is a kind of metal, also known as 'truesilver', not a kind of jewel

Oh the cold-fierce-warrior Legolas is refreshing and very very good to read.

Elladan and Elrohir here are fantastic, Aragorn is so sweet. It makes me sad to see him so jaded when he is still so young. Thank go that the hawk came back.

I love the hawk and I liké the fact that he is a wild one.

Yepp I defenetly love this story. Poor Estel god know what he suffered trough the hands of thise foul orcs. I hope they didnt rape him he just but a child.

I simpli loved chapter two. I like how you portray Elrond and Estel they are very beliveable. This defenetluy is a big AU but a good one so I will not mind the big changes you have made from canon. This story is amazing so fsr atleast. Now I will go and read more.

Oh the beginning was good. Now I will go and read more.

update soon! please please pretty please! O