Can't wait for more!

I love this!

I like your story! Update soon!

Are you still writing this? I hope so. I love your writing style. It's sometimes really hard to find someone who writes as well as you do. I really hope you continue :)

Any chance for an update? This is a really good story so far!

Love it hope to see more soon. ;)

I don't even know how to articulate how much I love this story. And I am also not good at writing well written reviews but I just want you to know how much I appreciate this story. It is so amazingly written. The details are just perfect. It is not too overbearing, which can happen some times, it is just right. The first chapter I have read probably over fifteen times. It is just so amazing! The relationship between Mia and Kylo is so interesting and complex, I love it. The torment that Mia is going through is so palpable, I feel so much for her and that is all to your amazing talent. I also love how you are writing Kylo's confliction. It is one of the most important aspects to this character and I think that you have written it so beautifully. The back and forth that happens with him whenever he is with her just makes my heart ache. Honestly, this is one of my favorite kylo/oc stories that I have read so far. The dynamic between Mia and Kylo is outstanding and your writing is impeccable. I truly hope that you update soon because I literally can't wait to see where this story goes. Amazing job!

I looooove this story! Don't let the trolls get you down!

The you write really gets a person hooked! I think there were instances where the tense switched and threw me off a little, but overall, the imagery and the descriptions you use are excellent! Will save this to read later, great beginning!

I really like this story . Can't wait to read more

Really like your story! Can't wait for more

So much feels going on but I can't wait for more I want them to have a happy ending and more flashbacks please

You're welcome. That trolling sucked. I hope it's truly over.

This was amazing! The conflict and Kylo's inner turmoil is so deep! I can almost feel his pain. Love that he misses her and ages of being apart they share a kiss! Please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter!

See, badass Mia much preferred to crying simpering Mi. I get the emotional struggle, I do, but I'm feeling overwhelmed with both her and Ben having this constant uncertainty and emotional turmoil. I'd focus on Ben- we have canon support for the type of behaviors he's displaying so if you had to choose one character to be that way I'd choose him. If you want it to be her you should go darker on him just to balance it out and keep the reader from feeling like the same schtick is constantly employed.

Also formatting can be your friend though I know on it's a huge pain.

-your friendly neighborhood English teacher.