It took me around 3 days with about 12 hours sleep total to read your series the one-shots from this universe. Still have "Ever The Same" to go, but theat's neither here nor there.
I love he world you made. I haven't seen one like it, but I love the way Rose decided at only nineteen years old "Nope. He needs me, so Imma be there for him. End of
2". Love her. She's brilliant. She's fantastic.

Ever just the same/ever a surprise~

Absolutely beautiful. This series has taken up my life since yesterday and I don't regret a single word of it. You made me love them all so much, even the ones i was skeptical of bc Moffat. Thank you.

AHHHHHHH this the end of the fabulous series, and Jesus Christ some of the moments in here, the way you made them all connect and link up with the older ones, one sec imma cry, I do have to say, I read the entire thing within a span of a weekish, because I just couldn't put it down, this is absolutely so fantastic

Chapter 6: Continuing to re-read and comment on every chapter!
Shoving someone in front of your currently-in-a-coma spouse is certainly a unique method of friendzoning. And I love it.
I love the image of the Doctor at the console, talking to Amy and Rory, just shouting behind him at Rose who's actually a hallway away.
Love Rory. Love him. His first scene, just checking Rose's pulse? Phenomenal.

Chapter 5: Continuing my quest to re-read and comment on every chapter!
You create tension super well. Like when River quietly calls the Doctor "Dad" accidentally is just so good.
I looooove the Doctor visiting young Rose! Love it. Love young Rose. Makes me wanna go watch her first few episodes right now.

Chapter 4: Continuing in my quest to re-read and review every chapter.
I know I've said this before (like a long time ago by now), but I love how you've fit River into this story. I never liked her on the show because she felt forced in and honestly at that point, nothing ever made sense.
Knowing what happens later on in your version, I'm loving the re-read even more than the first time through. You've so subtly made little nods at future events/relationships/etc. for each of the characters. It's great.
I probably shouldn't have started reading this shortly before going to bed because, ugh, angels. But oh well!

Loved how Rose and Amy went from jealousy to proper friendship. Imagining the 12th Doctor and Rose together made me smile. Seeing Jenny begin to become a proper mother to Olivia-amazing!
Great work, and I loved every bit the second time around.

A little contradictory with Tim and the ponds. He said last time he already knew them before meeting them, unless he was lying about his since thing

I like the way you covered a couple of episodes via Doctor telling a still-sleeping Rose about it.
Imagining Eleven mouth along to Tim's "I see sh!t" over the phone is hilarious.

You do such an excellent job of changing your writing so that it comes off truly sounding like the Eleventh Doctor now instead of Ten. Honestly, their personalities come off the page. It makes the story so much more immersive.

love it always felt so bad for the doppelganger for how Amy treated him so I love how easily Rose accepted him like we all knew that she would

love

Even better then I hopped

OH MY GODS THAT WAS FANTASTIC
ABSOLUTELY EPIC
WORTHY OF REREADS
*applause*
Thank you so much for sharing your amazing talent to spin words and world. Completely fantastic

I'd just like to point out I've read this (and the ones before) within like a few days and you made me ship Tim and Jenny and briefly Jake and Mickey only for you too rip it away... great job normally hard to do so.