Eeeeeee! Love it! Thank you!

Cute alternate ending

LOL! Still love this story. I like that it brings those two closer. She brings out his lighter side. He makes her less oblivious. Nice balance.

This was witty, funny, sensual, tension-filled, interesting, emotional and sensual. Haruhi's reactions and declarations were so cute and ambiguous. Kyoya was just as usual - the gem in the story, keeping all the characters in place and giving the mood to the story. Thank you for writing this and giving them life .

Loved it! I like how you tease us with this scene but don't go overboard. Is there more to come? Please say YES!

IDK how I missed this! This was so much fun! :)

cute story

Do you plan on writing more chapters? Please do! Thanks

Love, Kitty.

Really enjoyed this! Thanks for the read!

*is very pleased by this story*
*claps heartily*

I admit, I love the pep in this piece. Haruhi challenging him to something like a pillow fight originally caught me as rather OC, but you've worked it into their voices so well that it actually made sense. And the chemistry? Fantastic!

Well, that's a new one. I was so happy to see that you had written a new kyo/haru fic, excellent Christmas present.

And I totally agree with you about the citrus. As much as I love the pairing (and I totally do), I generally avoid episode six slash fics. No matter how hard people try there is always a dubious element to it.

Lolz Pillow fight, how cute. XD

Oft misinterpreted indeed. I tend to agree with your take and like the way you built the tension here. I enjoyed the fluff and like this change in their relationship. It was also good to see the original parts as it reminds me both of the show and of the manga. I'm glad we could get a gift of this and quite enjoy the way your mind works. :)

Happy New Year!

Thank you for the fluff! Wonderfully written spinoff; I enjoy reading different perspectives on this seen. Good to know neither of them are robots, lol.