Reviews for The Story
kate4life chapter 34 . 7/16/2018
this story was good.
kate4life chapter 32 . 7/16/2018
SQUEAL!
Death Fury chapter 34 . 11/12/2016
Great story!
ExiledRanger chapter 34 . 8/13/2016
Well let me say first that you have a wonderful way of playing characters off of one another in a way that seems natural and refreshing as you don't see many styles like it in fan-fictions! Great work on your story. I decided to keep my reviews for the end so that I would have a chance to give the work a full review that encompasses my entire experience :) First of all, it really enriches the reading experience having read your other stories. I think that the idea to weave your other stories into this one as cannon is a truly remarkable feat and you accomplished it brilliantly! While a part of me wishes that you would write a sequel, I feel that sometimes, the best stories are the ones that are written to be the best they can be on their own. One of my favorite examples of this is the Princess Bride. In my opinion, you kind of adopted the same outlook with a great frame story in your main character. I think that you made a wise choice saving your writing from falling into the Great Black Hole of Action that most writers do when they believe that not enough is 'going on'. You paced the story beautifully and, as a result, I never felt that the tale was rushed. Great work and I would be happy to beta any rough drafts you would be interested in writing! I'd love to see you continue what you are so gifted at! Congratulations on your achievement and on a job well done!
Guest chapter 17 . 7/17/2016
Make Po a tiger plz
lulu2613 chapter 14 . 2/29/2016
I'm loving your story but I'm confused 65 % of the time because I haven't read any of your other stories or the KFP books.
lulu2613 chapter 11 . 2/29/2016
The fourth wall is when a character breaks it and talks the audience
Mei-Yi chapter 34 . 2/20/2016
Wow. I've been following the updates on your story from when I found it on fifteen chapters not so long ago, and it is honestly the best fanfiction I have ever read.
Guest chapter 34 . 2/20/2016
Best story EVER! :D
OH MY LORD PANDAS chapter 34 . 2/20/2016
Awesome ending
mei-yi chapter 33 . 2/19/2016
*Mantis* awesome story bro
*Monkey* yeah
*shifu* get back to training!
(all run screaming as shifu whacks them with his staff.)
*shifu* PO WHERE ARE YOU?
(Po turns around with a mouthful of peaches) *what? _eyes grow wide_ uh oh. AAAAHHHH!*
OH MY LORD PANDAS chapter 33 . 2/19/2016
I really thought that the story was going to end here, but I'm glad it's going to keep on going for a while more. This is a really great story xD
pandamaster97720 chapter 33 . 2/19/2016
please go on with the story its so awesome an I love it
pandamaster97720 chapter 32 . 2/18/2016
please go on with the story its so awesome an I love it
MasterJiaZhi689 chapter 32 . 2/18/2016
:)
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