I enjoyed reading this story. Please do continue.

I love your story so far, please continue.
Just read chapter 1 and intrigued to know where Elliott and Miss Abigail are.

I like it, the story has a lot of potential.
Don't take too long to update ;) .
And merry holidays!

L.

I gotta say I'm really enjoying this story you caught my attention and know I want to know what ,when ,where and how it's all started lol but I'm loving your writing and can't wait until the next chapter...

i don't think you need to worry about your writing skills at all. This story is great and I can't wait to read more!

I am really intrigued by this and I can't wait to read more!

Damn!That was very emotional,again you are doing a wonderful job building the story which I am positive will as you say make sense soon,I think I have an idea,but I am leaving the writing to you since you are doing such a terrific job!Again,I love the pace,great story you,loved it. EOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEO..FOREVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR..

First off!Never be afraid of posting your work!Do NOT base your success on how many reviews you received,it is not accurate,I can tell you this because I have read some excellent stories and others that could not come even close, sometimes out do them in the review department not because they are good,it is because each of us see things differently and have different will never know how talented you are if you don't post,and so far you are doing a great job writing,so please continue,since you've already captured my attention and is intriguing me with this criticism is very important,it only make you better at what you you. EOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEOEO..FOREVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR..

Can't wait for more. I'm even more interested to see where this is going now

Really love this story ... so please continue fast ... cant wait to read more about it

So I'm guessing Witness Protection... good story though. Interested as to where this is going. Keep it up

I am scared to see what comes next beacuse I do not like Sad EO stories yet I am so intrigued that I hit the Follow Story button !

What in the world happened to them I wonder?! I can't wait for you to explain. And please make they chapters longer.

so sad

Hooooly crapadoodles this so good
So excited&update soon
And lol luke can gtfo livs heart belongs to el