This was so lovely, vivid, and enjoyable to read. Asami's descriptions were endearingly scientific and it's refreshing to see her out 'out of her element ' with Korra in control of the surroundings. This is really under reviewed, and I wish to help remedy that. I hope you continue writing, and great job again!

good story

The story was very well written and you presented the characters very realistically, which is great. I also liked how you portrayed the relationship between Korra and Asami.

Soooooooooooooooo... you've earned the Krogan headbutt of approval!