Ok I was just over with Lax and NOW I fully understand what's going on and my mind is blown. YOU. ARE. GENIUSES.
This is so innovative I feel as though my brain is ready to fall out of my ear. I have to go to bed now because I have a life outside of this fic but Im saying, right this second it doesn't feel that way.
Can I just like, BE Lizzie. A huge thankyou to anyone who had input in this story, I don't how you are doing this but its SO cool.

update soon please!

I love the a variety. I think it's cool that you got a bunch of people to create characters and now you are bringing them to life. Atleast I think that is what you are doing. What a challenge! People can be so protective of their OCs.

Honestly, this is the highest compliment I can give someone, having read your stuff I think I could let you write with one of my precious OCs. Not that their all that amazing but their mine, you know? I'm attached to them. I just feel like when you write you stay so true to each characters perspective. This is particularly easy to recognise with your handling canon characters. Loved it, you do girl

I adore all these character! I think you wrote Harry really really well. Armand DOES seem like he would make a good leader. I like this feeling, this kind of 'bad ass squad assembles' vibe. Very vogue at the moment but not overly done in fanfiction. Atleast not HP fanfiction, I love your adaptation of the trope.

I love/hate this AU as well. Obviously I love it because ADVENTUROUS TIMES AHEAD. But also it breaks my heart whenever there's an AU where they lost the war. Alas VIV LA RESISTÁNCE!

Will you be updating anytime soon?

Update please? Please? Pretty please?

1. What are your shipping hearts? Honestly, I'm not really shipping anyone at this point. I haven't seen how the chemistry between two characters works as a whole. I am for Gregor and Nydia, but mostly because he needs to put a lot of trust in her. She knows what he is now. But I would like to see them interact more before I decide if it's better to have them as just friends or to if I want to see them be more.
2. Honestly, I want to see them learning the Patronus. Obviously not Gregor, as he already knows it. I can actually see Harry teaching the others said spell, just like he helped everyone in his fifth year. I'd also like to see the characters outside the school, maybe get a look at their family lives and how they've changed because of the situation they find themselves in.
3. I'd like to see the teams remain seperate for a while longer. Just until the team dynamics are fully fleshed out.
4. No. Just...no. I'd like to see them remain as they are, with only a few bumps for them to get over. It builds up their characters best when the dynamic isn't changing over and over. The only change I'd like to see is a strong bond building between the members. Something that will last long after their success(?) and graduation.

First off I want to say that I'm sorry for the late reviews, school and life has just been crazy. Sort of like how things are getting pretty crazy for the gang down at Hogwarts. Now we start seeing the plan come into fruition with Ciara sort of putting the moves on Aidan to get info but that hurts Arlina in the process which makes me sad but maybe she'll understand. I can't wait to see what part the others start to play later on and if they become closer too!

Wow, first I can't believe Aidan would do the same thing to Ciara as he did to Dante and what is his plan besides kidnapping them. I mean what would his goal be at the end of kidnapping two people who are his friends I wonder.

Now, Gregor's part in this is making a lot of sense. A seer? I didn't expect that I have to say. And I thought Armie's worrying and his overall pov was very nice as it makes him seem a lot more human and his banter with Arlina was priceless.

1. What are your shipping hearts? Nydia/Gregor, pssoible Armie/Calista, Aidan/Calista, Laurel/Warren.

2. What scenes you'd like to see that maybe aren't too plot driven? (Little scenes and side-plots) I think maybe sometime in the future if they had to deal with a Boggart would be awesome to see each person's fears and how they handle it. The Qudditch match between Slytherin and Gyrffindor. I would love to see them have a ball at the castle again and see who goes with who or solo and ends up with someone else at the end of the night.

3. Would you like the teams to remain divided with two separate missions with one common purpose or just one big mission? I think they should have another common purpose before they have to team up for one big mission.

4. Would you like the dynamics to change? So far, I like everything you're doing but maybe a switch up leaders for the next team mission would be interesting and get to see how someone else leads the team could be interesting just to see how the others deal with it or possibly, maybe Aidan joins one of the teams and which could cause a rift or ripple within the group and we can see them fall a part a little before coming back together.

Since I showed all characters in this chapter; How are you all feeling on your character's portrayal, by LL and I both? Thoughts on the others as the team dynamic starts to grow/change? What do I need to work on? What scene did you like and what would you like to see more of?

Woah! This was such an intense chapter. So much stuff happened! I'm really liking the Part I- Part II thing happening. Is that how the rest of the chapters are going to be written?

1) I am so bad at this because I always ending up having so many ships and can never decide. (It is an awful and painful problem). With this group, I have so many more ships to add to my already ever growing list. My biggest ship in this team is Nydia/Ciara, because omg, talk about a Slytherin Power Couple? I ship it so hard, it's kinda sad. (I also low-key ship Nydia/Gregor)

2) I think a Quidditch match would be fascinating to read and I'd love to see the Patronuses develop too! As I mentioned to LL, I think it would be cool to see the gangs in their classes and interacting with their teachers too!

3) I'd love to see them all on one big mission. Watching all 10 kickass together would be so so so amazing to read. (You have no idea how excited I am to see the merge!)

4) Not really. Honestly I love all the characters. I think adding or subtracting characters would take away from the beauty of the current dynamics. I love the leaders you've chosen for both stories and I really like where this is headed.

One scene I really liked was the conversation with Nydia and Gregor. It gave both of them a chance to shine and really liked it. I'm super pumped for more of the two of them, but I'm still crossing my fingers for more Ciara/Nydia scenes.

Dante, and Ciara, or Dante and Ryan.

Maybe them with their friends that don't know about the missions.

Eeh...

Not really.

Was Ryan one of the Ravenclaws?

1. Well i do like Fitz and Laurel but i think they need to alter their attitude towards one another and become less flirty and more action. I also like the idea of Dante and Ciara. They seem to both be in a pretty messed up situation together and it would be cool if they could rescue themselves. I like Gregor and Nydia big time. she is good with him and bringing him out of his shell- if you don't want romance i would like them to strike up a close friendship. Aidan and Calista could be a funny scene. Dont know if I ship them but maybe. My out there one: Warren and Lizzie?

2. Well I like a patronus. It seems to be a 5th year spell (Harry learned it very easy) and maybe Harry gets someone to come in and teach them.

3. A bit of both. I think the teams are starting to connect a lot and if there are too many that will unravel i think. So i see a connected teams like they learn patronus together and advice each other but not together

4. Yeah i would. i dont think armie is a good leader and Laurel is okay but not excelent. They are more outgoing and popular and pretty but i dont think they would be ideal. I think Nydia and Dante for the two teams.

Fitz is perfect. Like better than i could imagine. On your characters I think Ciara and Lizzie are the coolest. Maybe work on not focusing so much on Armie and more on others. I know every story needs a main person (harry potter, percy jackson etc) but i dont think Dante has a dynamic enough personality to be that person. I think Ciara does.

I would like to see more Nydia, Ciara and Lizzie. Your very very good at writing girls

Well done! If this is critical im sorry. really think this is amazing, i just am always told to be super honest so there you go!

You guys are a great team and i am so excited for chapter 4

I really love the part two of this story and that I can see what is going on else where. I was surprised that Lizzie was one of the only ones that really had no idea what was going on. I do think that it works better that way because I think the plan might have been affected if she would have known.

I think the part that I was most surprised on is that Aidan is kidnapping Ciara along with my character Dante. I do think that he feels really betrayed about the whole issue. I think that Aidan cared deeply about each of them and is confused. I'm curious to see what they are going to talk about.

I'm really curious about where this door is going to that Gregor found and what's in it. I think it's an important step in the plan or something. I can't tell.

All right now let's get to our set of questions.

1. What are your shipping hearts? I think in this story I do ship Gregor/Nydia, Lauren/Fitz, Dante, Castila,

2. What scenes you'd like to see that maybe aren't too plot driven? (Little scenes and side-plots) I would like to see a dance maybe or some class scenes. Maybe learning a spell or something.

3. Would you like the teams to remain divided with two separate missions with one common purpose or just one big mission? I still think I'm leaning towards a common purpose.

4. Would you like the dynamics to change? No I think that is working really good.

I feel that both of you are doing such a good job. I love the different writing styles that you bring and various styles. Update soon please!

Another brilliant chapter. This chapter packed a lot of information and also a lot of thing happens.
So now, question time!

1. A lot actually. I like Fitz/Laurel, Aidan/Ciara, Calista/Dante, and Nydia/Armie or Nydia/Gregor, can't choose.

2. I'd like to see them learning patronus and a Quidditch match. Also maybe some filler chapter to see the teams bonding with their teammates.

3. One big mission, I want to see the teams different approach to the mission and also more cross over ;)

4. Adding a person would be nice.

Both you and LL's portrayed Aidan's perfectly, seriously. I like that you showed more of Aidan's darker personality and perfectly tackle it. Now that he abducted both Dante and Ciara, I wonder what their conversation going to be.
For the team dynamic, I like that you showed more side of Armie, which made him a bit likeable. Gregor's power might be vital to find those two abducted Slytherin, and his POV showed himself more and I love it.
I want to see more Lizzie and Ciara interaction, their opposite personality match with each other.

1. What are your shipping hearts? Okay so I know I've been saying Nydia and Armie, but that last scene just totally got me thinking how well Gregor and Nydia can suit each other. Yes, opposites attract, but let's face it, they have a lot in common, both being sort of removed from society and all.

2. What scenes you'd like to see that maybe aren't too plot driven? (Little scenes and side-plots) like I said in LLs, I really want to see them learn patronised, and if the Animagus thing is okay, a little bit of that possibly. A Side plot where Nydia tried to rescue Kistiñe from her family with the help of her team could be interesting.

3. Would you like the teams to remain divided with two separate missions with one common purpose or just one big mission? Big mission, I'd love to see how Calista and Ciara would mix!

4. Would you like the dynamics to change? Not particularly, I think you've both been writing incredibly!

How are you such an awesome writer?!
Keep up the good work. :-)

1. I like Gregor/Nydia, Calista/ Dante, Ciara/Aidan (or switch Ciara and Calista) and Fitz/Laurel...my longshot weird one is Armie and Warren! I dont know why i just kind of see it.
2. I'd like them to develop a patronus or find a boggart. Reason being is it says a lot about a person and who they are.
3. 2 separate but can work together. Needs to be a big mission! maybe make an extra a bad guy. Aidan has already been cleared but Arlina or Warren?
4. Of the teams? It'd be cool to switch up leaders. I dont see Armie as a leader and think Ciara would be better. And in LL I'd like to see Dante take the reigns. The two captured people.

Thank you for giving Lizzie a bigger role! I like that she grew some balls and stood up to Ciara. The team dynamic is interesting. They don't seem to respect each other. They all (minus Lizzie) seem to think they're better than the rest. I do really like Ciara- like you have done her so well. she is truely the ballsiest character of the five. i think that after this scene she might be a little different. more patient and kind hearted? i dont know become more of a hidden dragon.

I'm not a huge fan of armie because i feel he is a bit gary sue- it was mentioned in LL that he is an overrated quidditch player but i think this chapter you showed some weakness in his worrying nature which made him more likeable.

Gregor really showed up too! a seer? I'd like to know more about that. but i have a feeling that the door calista had been in and talked about in the previous chapter could be the one they are locked in? The teams might need to come together!

Well done! great chapter!