| Reviews for Curls of Smoke |
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   Mickori chapter 18 . 7/27 Amazing! Good work |
| TGKrayton chapter 16 . 7/25 SB User People like you are the worst of humanity. I hope you get arrested, you bigoted ass. Seriously, how dare you? You have no right to hurl abuse and transphobia at an amazing story that 1. is free, and 2. no one is forcing you to read. The author has made it abundantly clear that they don't want transphobic comments like yours here, so shut the hell up, and go to hell. |
| SB User chapter 1 . 7/24 Having disregarded CuriousButIrrational's reviews? Big mistake. Not only is the MC a tranny little faggot purely for drama and SJW goodboy points, it's also full of the most writing by the goddamn numbers when it comes to drama. I'd never, not even to my worst enemy, recommend this steaming shit pile that this incontinent incompetent author shat out onto the internet. To all the tasteless smooth brain motherfuckers trying to hold this up as "objectively quality writing" and other such tripe? Do the world a favor and join the 50% of trannies who kill themselves. You're all utterly sub-human, fit only for death. Sincerely, the world would be a better place if we had roving death squads to burn you rats out of whatever hovel you try and congregate in. tl;dr MC is a tranny nigger, and degenerates like you belong on a cross. |
| Sam est classe chapter 18 . 7/23 Thank you for the chapter. I like how I was stressed with Mori about the two Konoha's shinobis; it was really well done. |
| AraelStannis chapter 18 . 7/22 Oof. I look forward to seeing where this goes (hopefully not Haruka getting caught up in the massacre) |
| sarahgri99 chapter 18 . 7/22 I loved it! I didn’t expect zabuza and Haku to show up! Can’t wait for more! |
| TGKrayton chapter 1 . 7/21 CharmingButIrrational Will you shut the hell up? No one wants to hear you bitch in the comments about 'pathetic writing', 'drama bullshit', or your 'SOD'. This is an objectively great story. If you don't like it that much, don't read it, but don't insult the author and whine about things here, you ungrateful troll. |
| serus black antihumannature chapter 18 . 7/20 good work |
| TGKrayton chapter 18 . 7/20 Amazing chapter! It seems Mori is getting more confident, always a good thing to see. |
| PridakArbiter chapter 18 . 7/20 Makes me think this is just the calm before the storm. Good job! |
| Taiyong Medical chapter 18 . 7/20 I really like the story so far. Mori joining Zabuza and his mother surviving is absolutely not where I expected this to go, and that’s all for the better. |
| ptbv chapter 18 . 7/19 thanks for the chapter |
| Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 18 . 7/19 Good work! Enjoyed this chapter! A very tense chapter! As I read it, my heart kept pumping like crazy! I felt like I was a part of that very situation in here for a sec! Lol! |
| CharmingButIrrational chapter 17 . 7/19 so the person who escaped is the sister of the one who Haruka killed and has a massive personal grudge. could not have guessed that. at all. such a new revelation |
| CharmingButIrrational chapter 16 . 7/19 ooooooof fucking course the one eye got away. as soon as i hit review for that last one i thought to myself dammit i should have added that i knew for sure you were going to make her blind and either both eyes were taken or just one and lo and behold the most basic of cliche plots that can cause the most drama was picked. Because of course one squad from iwa is strong enough to hold jiraya at bay long enough for one of them to run away. HAHAHAHAHAHAH |
