Reviews for First You Get Hurt, Then You Get Close
bronson.simmerman chapter 6 . 5/9/2019
Please update soon will will and Connor both have her or just one
Ilovebooks223 chapter 19 . 8/19/2018
I WISH I READ THE USERNAME OF WHO WRONG THIS BEFORE CLICKING ON IT I HATE YOU FOR RUINING THESE SHOWS
Lisa chapter 24 . 8/10/2018
This is worse than your other one : Please stop, writing I beg you.
wildmexican chapter 1 . 5/31/2018
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daniellepaduch26 chapter 24 . 11/22/2017
Please update love this so much
Musicfrnd54 chapter 24 . 5/27/2017
this is so good. I loved it I can't wait for more.
Guest chapter 23 . 5/16/2017
Please update love this story so much
Guest chapter 23 . 4/3/2017
Please update love this story
Guest chapter 1 . 3/10/2017
Update soon please love this story so much
Ms Isabella chapter 23 . 1/2/2017
SCOOTER? OMG, that is frickin' hilarious! Clover is a hoot! She needs to be in more chapters. Amadeus cracks me up. Love it that he's Maggie's nephew.

Aw, the after effects of laughing gas... Poor Snow! Glad they talked and got everything straight.

And ZING to Natbitch! YESSSS! She finally gets what she deserves... NOTHING.

Update soon, please?
M39151 chapter 22 . 10/24/2016
Aw, that was a cute and sweet chapter. Dare I say it to risk it coming back to haunt me, but it seems thay Will has changed and learned his lessons. The polar plunge was hilarious and will always serve as a reminder to him. I liked seeing Jay in this chapter and more interaction between him and Will, their brotherly relationship is not explored enough on the show. I liked the flashback to when Will first Snow at the gym, how out of character for him to be tongue tied.
On another note, it was really good to see Ethan. I like him so much on the show and I feel like he's not as developed as some of the other characters, so I liked seeing your interpretation of him. I never knew he and Snow were close, the hug was cute, and it was sweet when Snow encouraged him to ask out the lady with the parrot-way to pay homage to the show and Ethan's new parrot friend, lol. I was really glad that Snow finally apologized to Connor, it was a long time coming. Of course he forgave her because he's a great guy and I hope they remain friends. His comment about Snow bringing out Will's personality was funny. Great chapter, please update soon.
Ms Isabella chapter 22 . 10/23/2016
Oooh... Connor has a new girlfriend? Be interested to see who she is.

I hope Ethan heeds Snow's advice and asks out the neighbor with the parrot. Bird play date, perhaps? Too bad he's so shy.

Super Mario Brothers boxers... totally hilarious!

Sooo happy they are together at last... Snow is good for him.

Update soon?
daniellepaduch26 chapter 21 . 9/20/2016
please update really good story
Ms Isabella chapter 21 . 8/4/2016
Wow... emotional chapter. So glad Snow confided in Will about her diagnosis. So happy she will well and healthy now. However, I think she gave in to him too easily.. and he really does not deserve her. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
M39151 chapter 21 . 8/3/2016
Poor Snow. I could understand and feel how hard that was for her to admit. Especially to Will. Illness like that changes a person forever and she is very brave for having gone through it, beaten it, and attempted to get back to her regular life. Cancer is very difficult, my grandma had cancer and she didn't make it unfortunately. I felt all the emotion and all the pain coming from Snow, she's been a through a lot. But she is strong and a survivor and I know she will make it through.

It was obvious that Snow was going to take Will back, but I honestly don't feel like it was warranted. It all happened too fast, Will made one gesture outside her window with Jay and their friend, and Snow just gave in. After the way he treated her and broke her heart, I just really feel like Will needed to do way more. Snow tried to put up a fight, but I think she was so overcome with emotion so I understand why she gave in so easily. But Will really needed to do much more, really prove his love beyond an outside the window serenade to really earn Snow back. I still don't trust him and I worry about what he'll do next to hurt her. She would definitely be much better off with Connor. Anyway, please update soon so I can see what happens next.
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