Fourth walls have feelings too, you know.

Love the way this story went. No big bad wolf. Just a slice of life story with action. You are an amazing writer. Hope to see more of this story

I liked the chapter.

I've been up reading this fic up to chapter 18 now. While I don't mind you trotting around with the drama, I do mind about your grammar and spelling mistakes. I'm very iffy about these things though I can forgive a few, but it must have been like 50k or more words by now and you can't even get your and you're right in every sentences. It just ticks me off you know?

Is it so hard to put it?

You're so beautiful
Your beauty is unparalleled

I'm sorry but you've butchered so many sentences and I apologies if I came off rude.

A fantastic story, from beginning to end. Pity we didn't get to see much of Rui and Silvia's lives after they settled down, but I think the ending did the story justice. As for the prequel, it will be interesting to see how it develops more, keep up the good work!

To be honest I've re-read this story a few times now. I love it. I take back my cancer point but the Celebi point stands. The story was constructed pretty well imo

Brilliant job. Finished last night and it laid with me. Though I have a few complaints.
1: Cancer seems overused as a plot point. Because we weren't aware of the fact that Rui was going to die until the very end, I think it'd be best to put Silvia in that place as well, knowing he lied when he said 'I'm OK' or something. As for the way of death? Maybe a heart attack. It's sudden and you know when you're at risk of one.
2: The appearance of Celebi really felt like a kick in the balls. Don't give any reason to think that what is established as it ruins it.
3: What happened to Lucard Trading? I get that the church is gone but that laid an expectation for Lucard Trading to fall as well.

Overall good job.

Why did you have to give rui cancer you should have connected the way to eternal life of what the bishop said then rui would live the same amount of days with sylvie and then they die together please make that it would be greatly appreciated by your audience

Great series, thankyou.

Such a nice Story, I really enjoyed it. Liking the prequel too. The only thing that bothers me is that the issue with Lucard Trading etc. isnt solved, but still... great story, thank you!

ahh, spice and wolf. I love that anime.

"...Supposedly, the silver coins are dropping in price due to lack of silver. They started collecting silver coins to melt them down and make them back into coins with less silver in them."

This... This made me feel... Iffy... I'm no economics expert, but if Silver is running low, then it must be worth even more value. So how does that shit happen?

is Blaire from somewhere? if so I'd like to know where from

Great story, but you really should have filed it under a Pokemon and spice and wolf crossover section. (Yet again, I doubt the story would be nearly as popular if you did...)

It is nice you decided to continue with this. I loved the main story and look forward to the next chapter.