Yeah... Usually I am all for OC. I love reading new characters that writers create. I feel like team Rey right now. I trully hate your character, and if I feel so strong about it right now I am not sure I need to continue.

It's like she doesn't exist, she has no goal but return Ben, no interests, no purpose. And even though I came to read about BenxOc, I don't feel it

Usually for me it's two options, character that you want to be or a character you can relate to, yours is neither, unfortunately. This story is not my cup of tea. I hope some of my words would come out as a constructive criticism. (Don't take it close to heart) Wish you a lot of inspiration)

For some reason this is a total facepalm. The writing is okay, not bad, but it's not enough...kinda. Okay. So, first thing is that the flashback was boring, I personally felt nothing between those two. I am not surprised he left, he is cold as a block of ice. Literally, nothing passed between them. Nada.

Second...so no one needs her on the team? She is useless? No combo skill, no mechanic skill or any kind of skill that would make her special and interesting? She is just that? Ben's old flame?

Even if no one trully needs her on the team, she is inside, basically, however 'unimportant' she might be, she has an inside information. No one in their right state of mind would let her go into the hands of an enemy with a reason 'he won't hurt her'. Duh. What?

So, I really didn't understand your character yet. No hate, I just tell what I feel. Also, I think that a small side-affair would've created a lot of 'in-depth' monologues and development for your character. Because for me she is focusing too much on the Ben, who doesn't even have that strong of a connection with her (judging by the flashbackI think that flashback rubbed me the wrong way, sorry)

As of now, I don't feel any connection between the two and I think her plan is awful, just a desperate need to place Kylo in the story.

I will read further and see maybe it will change ️

I am enjoying this story very much! I can't wait to see where it leads!

I am such a fan of this story. Excellent writing!

Awwww that was a great ending! I really enjoyed your story and hope you keep writing!

I think I'm going to cry! Your story is amazing. Do you think you're going to do a story for rogue one?

Eu gostei do final, parabéns!

I cried;( because I loved it and it was the end...what other stories have you got in mind?

I've loved reading your story and I will continue to re-read it lots :) would love to see a sequel one day.

I loved the ending! if you make a sequel, I'd love to see it!

Awww, please continue this story because it is amazing. I hope Nara would forgive Ben and come back to the light.
:)

nara seems sensitive, im only on the third or forth chapter so im not sure if that truly is her character. if it becomes to bothersome ill just have to stop reading.

Well that was an interesting chapter - thanks for continuing the story

To be honest, I'm a bit disappointed in this chapter, I don't think he should have turned back so easily, plus shebwill be in prison while he doesn't. I think that the first order should have came for him , but sad to know that your ending the story..:(( this was my favourite KyloRen story. But I'm looking forward to your new stories which will be?

I can't believe how long it has been since you first published this story. This chapter was good by the way. Probably one of my favourite fanfictions that I've read on Star Wars.