well that was awesome hot as hell.
. romantic and this chapter was filled with fun too... loved how they played David like that... it a very sweet story. hope you write more...

This is one of the cutest stories I've read! I loved this last chapter, so fantastic! But I really want to focus on one of the terms you used, bruised. I really like that idea of being bruised rather than damaged goods, a term most writers use. I think I like it because you damaged goods sounds so harsh, broken really and that it (the person) can't be repaired, but that's not the case with bruised. You have a bruise, it stings it gets ugly, but then something happens - it goes away and gets better. That no matter how painful that blow was it's only temporary, it won't be ugly forever. Really just fantastic job, loved the sweetness, loved the smut, loved it all!

Sweet!

I'm not sure how I've missed this but finally finished the first chapter. Boy you hit the Emma, walls high at the beginning there. I found myself being annoyed with her, just like I used to be when she treated poor Killian so awful. Curious to read Killian's thoughts next

I loved the story and I loved how they let Snowing know about their relationship hahaha

loved the little prank on David and thought the time with the lost boys was very touching

wow that was intense I loved it I am so happy they are together now I am curious to see how david reacts

loved this first chapter I look forward to reading more

This started off heart-whelming and so so touching and then turned absolutely hilarious! And it all worked SO well. Thank you for a fantastic read! 3

Gosh, this was incredibly hot and at the same time so emotional and beautiful. I love how much they have grown and how they are starting to see each other for who they truly are! 3

Hi! Wanted to tell you did a great job with the fic! As Killian would say "bloody brilliant"! I've only read till chapter two so far but I just want you to know that the smut in chapter two difintly counted as m rated so you might what to change the rating, but besides that it was amazing its all so sweet and perfect you're an amazing writer so keep at it!

Wonderful Christmas story with Emma and Killian, David and MM and the lost boys. I particularly liked Emma's conversation with Felix and the hope she shared.

This chapter was lovely! Ever bit of it was hilarious and sweet and I hope there's more!

What a great surprise! I didn't think there would be a third part and I loved it! It had everything that I would have liked to see, except for their first fight and the I love yous. Of course being only two weeks it is probably a little early for that. I think my favorite part was the lost boys part. It was great to see her put herself out there and go to killian unexpectedly. That meant so much to killian. And you wrote the interactions during the lost boys part perfectly. It was lovely to see the bond formed between emma and killian and how important killian is to those boys. The part with David was fun too, but the lost boys section really tugged at the heart!

FANTASTIC! AND OH THAT KISS!