I thought I read this one but I guess not. It was amazing.

Awesome ending!

I don't know how I missed this last chapter but I'm glad I found it! Great story! I really enjoyed how you write them and their interactions.

Great finish to a great story...thank you!

OK BITCH DAYUMN

OK seriously, lifetime supply of coffee? LOL! I love the moments where they appreciate the little things about each other. Also pretty sure it's intentional how you stick to Bo's ability to say random phrases and quotes to fit every situation, one of my favorite things about her in the show :D

Also I appreciate how the love scenes are never gratuitous. I can read them and appreciate them for reasons other than hot sexy times, but the emotional aspect as well.

ALSO friggin' Vex and Evony, have I mentioned yet you do them so well? Along with dialogue, one of my favorite things about your writing is your ability to stay true to their characters. I feel like any of this could have happened on the show, and the same lines could have been kept and no one would have known the difference.

...man I'm glad you yelled at me, I didn't realize how much I left out being lazy and wanting to read the last chapter before reviewing :P

Omg I about *died* when the flight attendants listened in on them. DIED. Also Lauren is such a badass. I can't believe I doubted her trickery for even a second.

Seamless. Other than the very beginning, which you yourself pointed out, the entire story was seamless. I don't recall any part feeling out of place or like it didn't play it's part in the grand scheme of things (or at least what we the reader think the grand scheme is xD).

My only comment would be that there was no indication after Bo's last meeting with Prigg whether or not she told Lauren about it. I feel it's implied that she didn't, but this is something I feel Bo would internally struggle with, keeping something as important as the safety of her parents. If she *did* tell her, there was no indication of that conflict.

That's my two cents. Can't wait for the sequel! I'll come back if I've forgotten something :P

Sorry, I've been meaning to say a few things about this story for awhile. Hell, I've barely had time to read it in whole. First off, Wow... Even though I haven't actually watched the end of Lost Girl...I do know what happens and this story just adds to keeping these characters live. Wow the raw emotions from this story...I guess I can't say enough. Awesome stuff!...I have enjoyed all your stories and they have really helped me get through some rough times while deployed overseas again. The military life can be difficult especially when you are away from home in harms way, so thank you giving me something to break the stress and keep my sanity. Thanks a bunch. Not much, I'm sure. But I got go. Thanks.

Always wanted to read Doccubus post LG. And I think this story is d one I was looking for! thank u for writing this, will be reading rest of the story now :)

WOOOOOOO JUNGLE LOVIN' LOL!

God that would have been awesome in the show.

Brb mom is yelling at to me to socialize, so I have to cut this one short. AMAZING chapter like the ones before. I really enjoyed the scene by the stream of Lauren seeing her brother.

Onto the next tomorrow!

Man, a jungle love scene would have been *great* :P

Also the centipede exchange had me *rolling*! I could seriously imagine that happening in the show!

Also Prigg seems a fitting name for this douchebag...

Onto the next!

Loved it. Great job. Thank you for writing this s.

Lovely, lovely, lovely. Thank you.
~ dw

Fave, fave, fave. It's never an easy road with these two but I LOVE that the challenges come from outside and that they get their happy ending. As it should be, they're stronger, better together. What a wonderfully satisfying adventure this has been. Never stop writing.

Wow. Wonderful chapter. Highs and lows. The thought of Lauren crumbling in an airplane toilet is heartbreaking. That really hit me.

Psychotropic jungle wanderings with a side of sex and sweetness. This chapter made my heart sing.
I feel like Lauren's in her element here and so I feel like Bo, competely enamoured.