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anthonymosca27 chapter 13 . 2/16 I really enjoyed the story thank you |
Guest chapter 13 . 9/27/2019 I really love the sea sequel to the story but if not thank you for writing it and it's not that much of a crack. Pairing as you think a possibility it might have been thank you and good luck on your future fanfiction endeavor |
Guest chapter 13 . 9/2/2019 I like the way you wrote the story I'd love to see a sequel |
Shell1331 chapter 13 . 10/20/2017 I don't care if anyone thinks it was cheesy or cliche - I loved the epilogue too! It was fun seeing their happily ever after and them having a brief reflection on how they got there. Fantastic work, truly. And I will definitely be reading your other stories! |
SakiHanajima1 chapter 13 . 10/18/2017 BABIES! Omg BABIES! That was perfect! What a perfect way to end this story! Although now I’m going to cry because it’s over. *cries* I really loved this so much! I’m going to miss Yusuke and Koto’s love story but at least I can always come back to it! Bravo! Another successful, amazing, masterpiece! |
Shell1331 chapter 12 . 10/16/2017 This chapter was great, if a little bittersweet as I'm sad to see it come to an end. However, I loved seeing their struggle through the 6 months, and the buildup made their 6 month anniversary that much more worth it! :-) I've absolutely loved this story and you did such a fantastic job establishing chemistry and developing their relationship. Their playfulness and banter was so much fun, and I loved getting to see Juri, Kele, Ava, etc have their happy endings too! Can't wait for the epilogue! |
SakiHanajima1 chapter 12 . 10/15/2017 AAGHHHHH! Omg that was so worth the wait! What a perfect way to wake up in the morning! Yusuke and Koto are OTP and just so darn cute together! I loved it! I am also insanely sad that its over except for an epilogue! I’m going to miss this story! Okay, okay, okay! Azuma and Kele are just so adorable. I didn’t expect that couple at all! Omg Juri and Kita! JUri gets a happy ending! Yay! OMG! Chu! AAAGGHGHGHGHGHGGHGHG! I literally squealed on that cute ass scene! Omg! Omg! I gushed in the cuteness! Kurama, Kurama, Kurama...oh little Kurama. You sly little fox. I just love him! I wonder how he ALWAYS knows where to find Hiei too? Hmmm...I wonder... YOU GO YUSUKE! YOU SHOW THOSE DEMONS HOW MUCH YOU LOVE YOUR WOMAN! YOU DIP HER AND KISS HER IN FRONT OF EVERYONE! *fans myself* And my face is still red...oh man...oh man..that was...that was. BRAVO! *bows down to your awesomeness* That was perfect! It had just enough details to not be tasteless! What a perfect way to end Just Any Other Day! I’m not sure my face is gonna go back to normal or not... that was just so! AAGGHHH! I can’t wait to read the epilogue! But more importantly... omg... your authors note has me jumping into happy dances! You did amazing on this story! Simply Marvelous! Jaw-dropping magnificent! Another amazing work of art by the talented Totidem Verbis! |
Shell1331 chapter 11 . 9/11/2017 Oh Kurama, ever the voice of reason and maturity lol. Of course, I'm sure he knows how to deal with Yusuke given who his mate is XD I loved the flashbacks from Koto's point of view - I thought it was such a great way to get insight on her feelings as well as show how her and Yusuke's relationship has progressed and they've grown closer. Her worry that she wouldn't be good enough and crying broke my heart for her. I was so glad Yusuke came home just in time to cheer her up. Her 6 month rule is intense, and I can't wait to see how they both handle it lol! But I like that they're taking it slow, and I'm so happy they're finally on the same page and have admitted the full depth of their feelings! |
Shell1331 chapter 10 . 9/11/2017 I loved how Yusuke was teasing her and Koto decided to get him back! :-) and then her fussing at him for lying around shirtless lol Their playful banter and messing with one another is such a fun part of their relationship. Blushing Yusuke is adorable and I'm so happy they've admitted their feelings. But Yusuke getting pissed off at breakfast at the tiger demon girl and calling Koto his girlfriend (not to mention their little heated public makeout session!) was probably my favorite part lol Overprotective Yusuke yesss XD Great chapter! |
Shell1331 chapter 9 . 9/8/2017 Omg wonderful chapter! I cracked up when Koto and Hoshimi surprised Yusuke and Hokushin :-) and that Hoshimi gave Koto a signal ;-) And we finally got more than one Koto/Yusuke kiss! :-) wooohoo! |
Shell1331 chapter 8 . 9/8/2017 I love that Yusuke came back for a night and that Kele caught them in bed together (even if all they'd done as sleep lol. I'm also enjoying Koto and Hoshimi's friendship - and I can't wait to see more Koto and Yusuke together! Great chapter |
Shell1331 chapter 7 . 8/30/2017 I really like Kele, especially since she takes the time to apologize and show remorse for her past actions. I also like that she clearly is rooting for Yusuke an Koto to get together! :-) The line "my decision is whatever Kurama agreed to" had me laughing out loud because that is SO Yusuke. Granted, he had a valid reason for being distracted but still... I really like the idea of Koto as a healer, and I like that she isn't a weak demon either - her making Chu yelp cracked me up. I definitely enjoyed the chapter, despite them being separated. Nicely done! |
Shell1331 chapter 6 . 8/30/2017 Chu cheering her on and Koto then "announcing" as he and Yusuke wrestle cracked me up. And then them getting each other covered in dirt and absolutely filthy was both endearing and hilarious. Total goobers those two. Then him "petting" her and rubbing her ears was so sweet and I love how close they're growing! :-) |
Shell1331 chapter 5 . 8/30/2017 I love this chapter - I really like when he comforts her, but I also like seeing her feisty side (even if she was half-asleep when she attacked him). Their snuggling was adorable, and I love the comment about everything about Yusuke being a surprise so "why should this be any different?" It's one of the reasons we love him! XD |
Shell1331 chapter 4 . 8/24/2017 Great chapter — a ton of good information and action, and your writing is as pleasant as ever to just submerge myself into. I literally laughed out loud at the line about “hanging entrails up like Christmas lights” XD Koto not wanting to go to sleep was so sad-it made me hurt for her so much because god only knows how she suffered, and Yusuke just talking nonstop to soothe her was the most endearing thing ever. I loved that scene so much. I hands down agree with you about at some point the wrong demon winning the tournament and using it to their advantage. And I also agree that Enki is probably the best option for running everything, what with him being simultaneously strong yet mellow. Loving this story so far. The slow burn works so well, like I’m savoring it :-) |