LOL, this was hilarious!

I really wanted a little more. You started off amazingly and I really feel that this story deserves to be continued. There are a few spelling mistakes,so,don't forget to correct them.

I forgot to tell you this last chapter but I felt the crowning glory of that chapter was when Ichigo and the pigeon locked eyes like 'lovers on a battlefield'. Also,why are your chapters so small? I want more,dammit!

First of all,I was intrigued right from reading the summary. And I loved this chapter so much that reading it once,I went back and read it again! I was a bit confused because in the beginning,Ichigo thinks of Rukia as Kuchiki and then,later as Rukia and I was confused as to whether it was Ichigo's thinking that changed or whether you unknowingly used both Rukia and Kuchiki alternatively. I really liked how you subtly implied that Ichigo has a crush on Rukia. Great job!

There's something very understated and cute about this story. I think it has great potential to become a full-on epic romance. Hope you continue writing!

It was an interesting ending. Again...felt a bit off that Rukia got so emotionally open to discuss Hisana, even if for only a tiny bit to Ichigo in such a short span of time. But lil bits and pieces of this fic made me smile and want to hug something really tight cause they were adorable :')))) A shelter for cats? Ichigo talking about his family. It went from him trying to get rid of a bird to hysterically meeting the equivalent of Rukia's family in less than an hour.

Good job writing this! I would love to see you continue it and to see where Ichigo and Rukia take off from here! :) keep it up x

"What I do not know is why he is in your living room, without proper clothing, and why you are sitting with him...also without proper clothing"
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HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA OH BYAKUYA :'DDDD
I love how it's got such a Bleach-ish feel to it. Like one of those Bleach comedy episodes where everything escalates too quickly and before you know what's happening, Ichigo's already gotten into a fist fight with someone ...y'know what I mean?
Anyway, good job with this story by the way! I really the way it's written and portrayed! :)

"It's sitting on her headboard, looking all … pigeon-y"
XDXDXD That cracked me up.
Altho it felt a lil off to read Ichigo winking and attempt to be flirty, it was not OOC, and kinda pleasant for good measure

Wow! This is certainly something!
I hope you update the next chapter and continue it!
It's too good to be abandoned!

Such a cool story! I loved reading the chapters. Really cool insight into Rukias past. I hope we get to learn more about what each are doing with their lives now!

well shoot, i'd like more. you have a writing style that is enjoyable to read

Pretty touching, that part about Hisana. Though it was nice to resume the humorous tone for the last line!

Fun stuff :D I never get tired of Ichigo and Byakuya staring each other down and having a clash of wills, whether in the manga or various fanfiction!

What an amusing premise :) And neat how it was inspired by a real-life story. I have to admit, though, that the start is too slow to get to the premise. One of two of those paragraphs could have been cut to create better flow.

I would honestly like to see this become a full blown story, I really like your pacing and humour, I hope you continue this one. :)