Are you planning to continue this? It's really good, but it's been three years since it was updated so I'm not too hopeful. If it means anything, I'd love to see Chapter 15! If you aren't continuing this, thank you for writing fourteen excellent chapters. They were so much fun to read!

oh jeez.

I wound up googling "are ladybugs territorial" just to check, because territorial insects? Really? Yep. Yes they are. Pardon. I must go wrap my head around this now.

Hey...why doesn't the show have some of this stuff? Like maybe Anansi being extra hard to defeat because Marinette/Ladybug is really scared of her? They should.

"...with all the air and confidence of a model..."

If she only knew.

Cool! I was wondering how Ladybug would catch the akuma with his baton.

One question. Why did you choose to give them their canon weapons? I think those fit better- after all those fencing lessons, Adrien would be better at close combat than he would be with the yoyo, and the yoyo definitely fits Mari better- it's just something I haven't seen before and I was wondering why you chose it. Thanks!

Ha, that last paragraph!

On another note, why did you decide to change their powers? It's an interesting choice, and I'm honestly curious as to why you changed them- and how you came up with how their new powers work.

Also, Chat's earrings had blue pawprints last chapter, and pink this one. If there's no reason, you might want to fix that.

Kay-ute! Love how you kept Adrien Ladybug. I don't *mind* when he's Mister Bug or Lordbug or what-have-you, but it's nice to see someone acknowledge that ladybugs (as in the insect) can be male or female AND THEY'RE STILL CALLED LADYBUGS. Also, thank you for using the feminine of 'noir'.

I'm loving the story so far! Have to go read ch2 now, bye.

Hi,
I absolutely loved this story so much! I really liked the fact that the characters took on the tendencies of the cat and ladybug. I can totally see Marinette purring. I hope you continue the story. :) I honestly love the power swaps so much. And the fact that the duo knows each other better than they do, at least I think so, in the show. It makes me very happy. I love the act Plagg is nicer and more forgiving towards Marinette, it makes me happy.

- Booksrlife15

I love your story, if you wouldnt mind, I would love it if you would email me if you make the next chapter to your wonderful story, if not, i understand. But if you will, plz email me it at

web2theweb yahoo .com
Just subtract the spaces in my email, and email me it , I will respond.
Thank you,
Web2theweb1

His corpse was found three days later. There were animal scratches on his cheek.

good god that was hysterical and adorable all at once!

Shouldn't it be Gentlemanbug and...yeah ok, not Chatte noire; Minette ?

This whole thing had me in stitches! I wish the show would put something like this in there with the spiders! I love how Adrien wanted to burn the whole house down and that Tikki agreed with him. Plagg is supposed to be the kwami of destruction. His reaction to the large spiders was great!

Love this story! Dying for you to continue it!

Hmmm

PLS CONTINUEEE! THE SUSPENSE IS TOO MUUUUCH!