Great fic.

Loved your usage of time travel.

Although I can‘t believe a 300 years old would prank someone by making sure he can never trust the reality around him.
Like, it seems a cruel prank to pull on somebody thats already paranoid.

I loved this story, thank you for writing this.
It was interesting to see how "good" and "bad" people can behave differently given enough time (eternity for some). Finally Sans understood that he wasn't necessarily the "good guy".

Ah, been a long time since I read this. Still one of my favorite UT stories. I especially enjoy your focus on the time aspect.

I love the dialog and everything for these chapters! And that "burn in hell" and "Good talk" part had me laughing. I love this fic because of just how unique the concept it

Brilliant story, loved it! Great job.

I just spent the past few hours reading this straight through and I have to say it was so expertly crafted.

It was so good, with rich events, balanced humor and a sound ending.

I'm not even done writing this review and I already feel nostalgic. Tem out of Tem.

Great story! Thank you for writing and sharing it! :D

Haha great story. I found it on a recommended list. I loved the bonding between Sans and Chara towards the beginning especially. And it had such a sweet ending. : )

Great job! This was a privelage to read.

Wow, I can honestly tell you that this has been one of my most enjoyable Undertale fics to read. The concept is stellar, I love your headcannons, your characterizations were on point (Sans was SO GOOD. Chara was SO GOOD. They were all great!) And the plot had me rooted in my seat from the moment I read the first paragraph! Im checking out your other works as soon as I can, you're really great at writing :)

Holy hell. This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. One that keeps the OOCness to a minimum but at the same time being original in its settings, all the while being IMMENSELY fun to read. This is actually better than many of the books I've read. This story is truly a treat for undertale fans. So all I can say is, thank you and well done.

this will go down in legend as the best fanfic ever written

i still dont understand any of the last 67% of this fic and yet i kept reading it and now nothing makes sense
but good job

This entire story made me cry so much. The strength that these children have to endure such deep emotional wounds is tremendous, especially Frisk who had to helplessly watch his chances for the 'happy ending' crumble before his eyes, one by one. The other two who were saved by Frisk must have been absolutely crushed when their beacon died in front of them as well. I know I could not handle any of this.

Bravo to you NPS.

Hey, I really enjoyed your fanfiction. I especially loved the first chapters. I read it to the end and I think the ending is really smart. Even though the first chapters evoked a much stronger emotional reaction in me. Thank you for sharing this story.