Can’t wait for the remaining chapters :)

Very poetic! This chapter has an interesting feel to it and was fun to read

I'm so pleased to see the story continue. Thank you for updating! I love your writing!

it's good to hear from you again!

I haven't forgotten about this story - keep coming back to it to read again. Looking forward to an update :)

Hope you keep going with this, seems like a good idea. NaNo is coming up in a month or two so...unless you got something else in the works. A great tip for writer's block that I've found it to write a summary of what you want to happen in a chapter (or for the rest of the story if that's easier) and then go back and start fleshing out the parts you know how to write. It will make the surrounding parts easier to write.

I am absolutley in LOVE with this story! It’s so cute and sad but beautiful and I like how every single one of the main characters really has a big role even though it’s written from Frisk’s (our) perspective most of the time. I can’t wait ’til the next part comes out, it’s going to be awesome!

Ps. Undyne is my favourite character and I love how much she does for the story. Please keep it up, not many novels include her this much :) Thank you for reading this!

Sad. But really good.

I panicked there for a bit

Aww. All I can say about this chapter is "aww". Nice hurt/comfort with the Alphyne.

Ahh, the bittersweet. It ever threatens to choke me up. So dang beautiful. Great chapter!

Oh, this chapter hurt to read.

Ah, Toriel, still not accepting her part in what transpired. Yes, Asgore did something very, very wrong, but you did something worse. You gave up. You just left and hid in the Ruins, leaving him to stew in his rash decision instead of, I dunno, trying to persuade him to change his fucking mind once he had a chance to cool off? And we see how well that turned out, now don't we? Sure, everything did work out in the end, but not before six other humans died for the decision both of you made. Him by allowing his anger to dictate his actions and you by just turning tail and running from your responsibilities as his wife and queen. I give you a slow clap for that one, Tori, because you've earned it.

Yet again, this fic breaks my heart while warming it. Loved every moment of this chapter. Everyone was so in-character. Keep up the awesome!

Welcome to Japan and great writing as always!