Reviews for The Girl That Could Have Been
Bo Little chapter 4 . 4/9/2017
Is there going to be any more? Please say there's going to be more this is really good and there isn't much about this prompt out there.
Kmbrun chapter 4 . 1/26/2017
Pft Charles with braids n bows in his hair...

This is great
Equinox Kitten chapter 4 . 4/18/2016
Aw, this was sweet. Life loves to throw us little curve balls like that.. congrats on being in your last quarter of grad school and good luck with your future endeavors!

I look forward to seeing where you take this story.
Equinox Kitten chapter 3 . 4/18/2016
Personally I dislike Leah with a passion, which is why I killed her off in my own story and gave Bran a mate he deserved. That said, this was another good chapter.
Equinox Kitten chapter 2 . 4/18/2016
This chapter was so cute! Poor Bran didn't stand a chance!
Equinox Kitten chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
I read the brief summary and went 'oo this sounds like it could be interesting' and so far I like it.

I do have the one bone of contention though. Twenty or so years prior to Moon Called, I don't think any abortion clinics had to do ultrasounds, but I could be wrong. Still, since it's extremely difficult to track down that kind of information and it helped the story progression, it's all good.
NightlyRowenTree chapter 4 . 4/12/2016
Lol yes young children can do amazing things to your poor long hair. I am so happy you update yay! :3 thank you
LokiLova chapter 4 . 4/11/2016
Good update - I am looking forward to the next chapter. Imagining Charles with ribbons in his hair made me giggle a little!
Keep up the good work!
LokiLova chapter 3 . 2/4/2016
I like this so far! I look forward to reading more.
Batman Fanatic chapter 3 . 1/13/2016
Can't wait for more!
NightlyRowenTree chapter 3 . 1/10/2016
That was good nice explanation why she doesn't enjoy the baby around
RachyRoo2 chapter 3 . 1/10/2016
Pretty sure Leah gets jealous of brans sons because she knows bran will never love her like he loves his sons. It's actually really sad, but she's a brat - so I don't feel sorry for her. Anyway you're a great writer ! ( And I'm loving this story )
Roo chapter 2 . 12/28/2015
Keep going ! I love this :)
RachyRoo2 chapter 1 . 12/28/2015
Nice! Keep writing pleasssseeee?
NightlyRowenTree chapter 2 . 12/21/2015
That's adorable
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