| Reviews for RWBY: Enter the Okami |
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  Silver voalt chapter 4 . 7/15 Update please |
 Sagicknight chapter 4 . 8/16/2019 awww velvet ruby amy conversation adorable ty for the read :) |
| Sagicknight chapter 1 . 8/16/2019 hahahahahahahahaha weiss rock into a hundred pieces love it |
| orajje chapter 4 . 6/22/2019 This is great! |
| Ceo160 chapter 4 . 12/27/2018 This is really good I hope you will update Also I adore Amy please update the story |
| vulcunniko chapter 1 . 10/10/2018 wished you continued this, i really like this fanfic |
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/15/2018 Hot damn, is this gonna get updated? It's hilarious, decently written, has a good concept, everything is just. Oof. It's so good. |
| Delta4Phoenix chapter 4 . 11/27/2017 I love this story. Hmm, what will happen when Zwei arrives? Ah well, why wonder about the future. |
| Hannah chapter 4 . 5/11/2017 I would love to see Ozpin's group having more scenes with Ammy and their reaction to her godly powers. |
| Cinus chapter 1 . 5/7/2017 Ugh when the ANother chapter will showed up :T |
| holothewolf16 chapter 4 . 5/4/2017 please update |
| Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 4 . 4/16/2017 interesting story pls update soon |
| Hyperjade chapter 4 . 2/11/2017 I was gearing up to criticize you on the fact that you seemed to be sticking to the plot and that the butterfly effect should be considered, but the end of this chapter takes away such a worry. Though Amaterasu suddenly being able to share her language with Velvet is a little odd to me, as I don't feel the explanation was adequate. Well, it was nonexistent, but that's not the point. It just seemed incredibly random for Amaterasu to decide to and be able to do that. I suppose it shortens the amount of story it will require you to succeed, as in having Amaterasu succeed. Until this last spontaneous bit, the writing, the humor, and the story, in general, has been very good. It could have branched away from the canon plot a little faster, but that's just my opinion. As long as you don't just make everything the same with a little more Amaterasu added to it, this story will be worth reading. |
| Dragon Man 180 chapter 4 . 1/20/2017 I kind of think it would have been better to have Blake as the Celestial Envoy simply because she'll be with the team most of the time. I love the image of Ruby as Little Red Riding Hood and Ammy facing off against a giant Beowulf. I also think Zwei might have a bit of a jealous fit when he sees Ammy, though it could change really quickly. I can totally see her teaching him the Canine Warriors' moves. |
| YumiStar chapter 4 . 1/14/2017 I'm so happy I found this. Please continue. :) |
