mischevious happy lol. looks intersting

NO GODDAMMIT ERZA

I LOVED THIS REVEAL, THAT FOOWER REALLY JUST LET THE CAT OUT OF THE BAG (room, in this case) FOR NATSU jsjshgahshs

OUTSTANDING, BRAVO, MAGNIFICENT THE WAY THEY MADE OUT? WOW
THEIR BACKSTORIES? HOW WELL YOU TWISTED CANON AND MADE IT SO INTERESTING TO READ?
ZEREF U PIECE OF SHIT?
Ma'am I love you

Omg? A slight implication that gray and lucy were a thing? (I think I read it incorrectly) akhzhahsuahahs *-* omg I'm loving this story more and more.
Thank you for including cana, she us a fav

Can't believe the blue pegasus guys manage the magic stor omfg

I am loving natsu as a witch I could never picture him as something else than a dragon as a supernatural creature but you make it work well my boy is being done justice thank you so much

I had a girl tease me once, so I raped her to teach her a lesson

This is one of the best stories I've ever read in my life

This is such any awesome story, Thanks for writing it! And you worked Loke's arc in there, I've always loved Loke's arc, it's short but so awesome. So yeah, thank you!

Please please pretty please continue. This is my absolute favourite fix out of the hundreds I’ve read

natsu is supes ticking me off with all his selfish theorizing right now like... did he forget how fuckin POWERFUL Lucy is? not even in a "dang she can totally beat people up" sorta wayshe's got some super rare magic shit that hasn't shown up anywhere for like 100 years! so even if he wasn't here, Zeref or other big baddies would probably want her anyway!

he should know it's actually a blessing that he found her bc not only is he able to help protect her, based on his conversation with erza about her powers not growing despite being around Lucy all the time, it seems like he's the only one who actually benefits bc of their bond so he can protect her even more than he thought!

... or was that something we already knew... I guess I vaguely remember them talking about how bonds can't be forced when discussing her magic... dang I should've gone back and read over that shit before I started ranting about it whoops my bad

anyway my point is that they'd probs would've tortured her until she helped them with whatever buffing shit her magic does but now they know that natsu's around they'd probs know that's futile hopefully maybe? Oh shit c'mon Zeref you're smarter than that...

Anyway.. the fact that I can get so worked up over your story is proof that it's really good! I love all the lore and everything and the nalu is adorable and I can't wait until she and levy (who obv already knows about magic whether or not she's an actual witch I mean for God's sake her thesis is literally based on how magic is affected by literature or something) are soulmates and that's why they insta-clicked and idk I sorta miss that little book worm
obv I haven't read the next chapters yet... so maybe she does... whatever

but over all, thank you so much for sharing your work with us! it's beautiful and I love it so much 3

jeez the key stuff seems more complicated than necessary... like, maybe it's different where you are or maybe it was just for the scene of natsu bein a show off, but as for where I live, you can get a key copied in like. 5 minutes. you just walk up to counter at walmart and the machine works and in the end the longest part is waiting for the worker to actually come help you...

is not really a problem tho! just something that irked me enough that I needed to point it out

Aw why are so many stories on this place unfinished by so many good writers

Soo...when will be the next update?