I cringed. Not because this was terrible, no, it was freakin amazing like everything else I've seen from you, but it was so heartfelt. I don't think that's the right word though, to explain this.
Is there a sequel? I need a written sequel to relieve myself of this; reading something else won't help that much.

Why...?

Why must you hurt me this much?

I cried.

Why must you hurt me?

My baby! Oh god the emotional intensity of this fic is just spot on. I can't. I just can't.

agh mercury you DICK. that part made me so sad. I guess the story's been too happy in the past season's or something. I hope someone believes yang in the next episode. you wrote the heartbreak so well man ;~;

Really like your interpretation of the situation, would love to see more

Best episode of RWBY yet. Best fanfic. Best everything. I cry.

The saddest part about this is knowing that they all probably do feel like that in the show and something like this could happen in the next episode.

And now I'm tearing up. I hope you are proud of yourself. ; )

I AM IN P AIN

*Screaming internally* This is incredible. Congrats

I just saw that episode and I frickin posses me off, like it wasn't Yang's fault, it was all Mercury, I can believe this! I so want to see the next episode, but it's not yet, dang it!

I now desperately need to see this episode!

That was so hard to read, in a good way. A really good way. Ruby and Yang's reactions to one another was so sad, I loved it. If that's how Ruby reacts in the next episode, it will absolutely break my heart.

10/10

same here.. I hate the latest episode.. why did this to Yang?!