It is about time the heroine save Dirk

This is quite the gem! I love the role reversal, and how cute Daphne is facing all these challenges. I also love how Dirk talks and how faithful he is to Daphne. Overall, I give this a 5 out of 5. Excellent prose!

(grins) This is just so much fun! Electra's so over-the-top stereotypical sorceress, and Dirk's seven escape attempts and subsequent sulking in the bubble are great! Poor Dirk, he doesn't have much fun in this one! :)