Reviews for A Birthday Surprise from the Black Organization
arda chapter 5 . 5/21/2018
even though i am a shinran shipper conan will never ever hand over haibara no he doesnt love her and he will protect ran at any cost but he will have probably chosen hiding for every single relative in danger anyway awesome fic OKINO YOKO that was so cool
ScarletShad0w chapter 5 . 2/25/2017
Great story! I especially like the inner workings of the Black Org, the boss hiding in plain sight between other members and changing unknown to many is an interesting concept. Some points in the story could have been explained in more detail, like the relationship between Vermouth and Agasa as well as the Miyano family. They were introduced quite quickly and could have taken a bigger part in the writing as they were quite important in the end. It would also have been interesting if Vermouth had acted only after Conan had given over Ai, as it would have resulted in more drama instead of cutting of the action before it had time to really start.
Guest chapter 5 . 2/11/2017
ahhh please writ a sequel,,, please let me know what happens with haibara,, u cannot end it here please,,,,,
Guest chapter 2 . 2/11/2017
This stupid ******* Conan was giving up haibara for Ran,,,, I can't believe it!
Angel-Chan234 chapter 4 . 2/11/2017
from now on,, i hate conan, and no longer support CoXAi,, even though this is just a fanfic but in reality too Conan would give up haibara for ran's sake, he sure will,, without thinking about my haibara, who spend all her time making the damn antidote,, for her she trully is just a way to get his body back and be with that damn ran. Conan does not deserve Haibara,, she is way tooo special for him, he doesnt deserve her or her love,, thanks for opening my eyes to the reality...
ASelfish Guy chapter 5 . 1/11/2016
Wonderful! Amazing! Great job you have done.
First of all let me thank you for writing this long, beautiful DC fanfic.
Now, there are a few observations I need to tell you:
(1) Gin's hair colour is actually silver, not golden.
(2) We all know that Gin can identity Sherry only from a single strand of hair, so why didn't he noticed Haibara at the time of kidnapping especially when he know that APTX4869 can shrink people?
(3) I liked the case Kogoro received and how Conan solved that. That was good.
(4) Gin's past story you made was very good.
(5) I liked how you described Haibara's feelings. You are an amazing author.
(6) To be honest I didn't like the part where Yusaku and Shinichi were talking over "case closed" (!?). Really, you didn't need to put that.
(7) I hoped to hear what was in Shinichi's CD. Maybe I will get it in the sequel you're gonna write.
(8) At the climax where Shinichi decided to hand over Shiho to BO shattered my heart into pieces, literally, since I'm a ShinXShiho fan. Please make your next work a ShinXShiho and keep writing such awesome fanfics.
ASelfishGuy chapter 5 . 1/10/2016
Wonderful! Amazing! Great job you have done.
First of all let me thank you for writing this long, beautiful DC fanfic.
Now, there are a few observations I need to tell you:
(1) Gin's hair colour is actually silver, not golden.
(2) We all know that Gin can identity Sherry only from a single strand of hair, so why didn't he noticed Haibara at the time of kidnapping especially when he know that APTX4869 can shrink people?
(3) I liked the case Kogoro received and how Conan solved that. That was good.
(4) Gin's past story you made was very good.
(5) I liked how you described Haibara's feelings. You are an amazing author.
(6) To be honest I didn't like the part where Yusaku and Shinichi were talking over "case closed" (!?). Really, you didn't need to put that.
(7) I hoped to hear what was in Shinichi's CD. Maybe I will get it in the sequel you're gonna write.
(8) At the climax where Shinichi decided to hand over Shiho to BO shattered my heart into pieces, literally, since I'm a ShinXShiho fan. Please make your next work a ShinXShiho and keep writing such awesome fanfics.
ASelfishGuy chapter 5 . 1/9/2016
Wonderful! Amazing! Great job you have done.
First of all let me thank you for writing this long, beautiful DC fanfic.
Now, there are a few observations I need to tell you:
(1) Gin's hair colour is actually silver, not golden.
(2) We all know that Gin can identity Sherry only from a single strand of hair, so why didn't he noticed Haibara at the time of kidnapping especially when he know that APTX4869 can shrink people?
(3) I liked the case Kogoro received and how Conan solved that. That was good.
(4) Gin's past story you made was very good.
(5) I liked how you described Haibara's feelings. You are an amazing author.
(6) To be honest I didn't like the part where Yusaku and Shinichi were talking over "case closed" (!?). Really, you didn't need to put that.
(7) I hoped to hear what was in Shinichi's CD. Maybe I will get it in the sequel you're gonna write.
(8) At the climax where Shinichi decided to hand over Shiho to BO shattered my heart into pieces, literally, since I'm a ShinXShiho fan. Please make your next work a ShinXShiho and keep writing such awesome fanfics.
faystay chapter 4 . 1/3/2016
Pls you need to do a sequel this story was so awesome rly nice written... need more :D