That was some nice dialogue, it was pretty cool. Yeah, it was a little too dialogue heavy, but it works. I really like the idea. This is such a niche crossover, there's only one other on this website and um slight problem I can't read that one when I want to have fun because I wrote it so...kind of sucks the joy out of it. I did notice certain heavy similarities to mine, but I'm totally chill about it. Srsly bro, you took the idea and you rolled with it and made it your own in a much more concise way. A lot less murder too.
Nice one. If you want to talk about Pushing Daisies some time, totally chill.
(Great job with the narration too)

Love it