| Reviews for Yeartide |
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jennelyn12 chapter 7 . 8/4/2016 Oops late review XD As always I'm awed by your ability to describe, really how the heck do you find your words?! And the fact that you included "Tinkerbell"... well done XD I don't mind, I think I'd actually like if you included some of the other films :D but this is RotBTD so maybe not XD I'm really enjoying this arc, I just love to read you describing their home, it's just so good! During this arc did you rewatch the movies? Because I don't know how else you find your ideas :D I can't wait for next chapter, it's going to be Hiccup's turn! Is it gonna be something like Berk, or is it going to be more like their secret cove? I wonder... Thank you for your hard work, because I can clearly see it and I appreciate it :D (Sorry for being late again -_-' ) |
Guest chapter 7 . 8/4/2016 What would be Hiccup home? Berk with all "the dragon ride" thing or more like the "Valka's dragons home"? |
Super girl xD chapter 6 . 7/28/2016 Kyaaa ya quiero saber la casa de hiccup kyaaaa son tan lindos sigue asi Besos desde Perú |
Jinxxs chapter 6 . 6/27/2016 next chapter plz |
jennelyn12 chapter 6 . 6/20/2016 Well thank you for the chapter ;) It was actually a long chapter,compared to the others, and I it was wise of you to separate into parts so it doesn't seem too rushed. I loved your idea about the spirits animal, especially the part about the animal in extinction or already extincted, it was so smart. The details about the place (lol Mordu's castle) was described well, you seriously have and extensive vocabulary for someone who doesn't have English as a mother language. I wonder about Rapunzel's home, I can't wait to see your other ideas :D Loved the chapter and always thanks for your hard work ;) |
jennelyn12 chapter 5 . 5/6/2016 I wanted to read some ROTBTD so I re-read this story and then I realized that I didn't review at all. Oopsie XD . It completely slipped my mind, I have this bad case of forgetfulness. Seriously. And laziness. Anyway it's cool that it's gonna be a one-shots collection, just some light hearted stuff, funny or ridiculous situations, anything really. Of course the serious part too. Maybe sometime later? (I want to see how goofy they are before jumping to the serious stuff). Still waiting for the infamous soon-to-be chapter 6 ;) (*whispering* I want to see some Toothless interaction with the other three or anyone else pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaasseeeee) Ok I'm done hahaha XD No I'm not XD I've got two questions: how long are the chapters gonna be? And will we know when certain chapters happen (I mean their timeline)? |
jennelyn12 chapter 4 . 3/9/2016 I guess now we're going to enter the plot of the story? Anyway I'm rather curious as to why Hiccup or the other seasonal spirits didn't meet Jack yet. Is it Man in the Moon? And i actually want to see how Rapunzel or Merida think of Jack when they meet him. And is Hiccup a sort of leader? I mean i wonder if Merida or Rapunzel met each other? I think you did a great job at balancing Jack's playfullness and insecurity, i don't like it when people make Jack too angsty XD Also Rapunzel, it's true that it's diffucult to balance her character and not make her too naïve but you did a good job :) I enjoy this story i really want to see how you're going to proceed and despite the fact that you're a foreigner i think you're doing splendid :D |
ActualGayGirl chapter 3 . 2/26/2016 I totally understand what you mean. I'm really bad at writing Rapunzel because I'm afraid I'm going to make her seem stupid. Or like a doormat. I think you did a good job. Most people do make her too nice or a total airhead. |
jennelyn12 chapter 2 . 2/25/2016 I like how it's going :D and Hiccup's sarcasm and sassiness XD keep up the good work! |
ActualGayGirl chapter 2 . 2/18/2016 Nice job describing her! You definitely got writing these characters down. Keep on doing what you're doing! |