Please make a comeback I really enjoyed this story!

Your view of Nami is ,she is not the kind of person that would sleep around for no reason other than pleasure,how did you get that view ?,she is a you even watched one piece ,because you seem to be clueless.

And it just ended ,we didn’t even get to the damn boss fight.

Hancock is a not interested in boa Hancock at all so won’t waste my time

And we’re done

If Hancock is in it I’m glad there is only 1 chapter left

If shanks cut the fruit with a knife the knife would get the fruits power

Luffy and robin are not a perfect match made in one piece heaven at all ,robin is an awesome character, but her and luffy do not match you just want to use her in a perverted way , which is fine , just don’t chat shit

Halfway and nothing has happened yet, another story where luffy has an incredible fruit but it goes nowhere , oh well time to find another story

So weak willed.

How do people take the only trait that these main characters have... and constantly stomp it on the ground...

have you abandoned this

PLEASE UPDATE
I LOVE YOUR STORY
UPDATE REALLY

I think I must know Nami too well. when she didn't get eaten by the sea king I thought I read 'Her purse was still beating way to fast'

first things I'm seeing are definitely Blackbeard eats Yami Yami no Mi before Shanks brings his fruit to Foosha village, and Coby was taken by Alvida obtains get cabin boy years sooner than otherwise.

Hold on. Blackbeard doesn't get the Yami Yami no Mi until after Luffy sets out to sail at 17.

So this is AU right?