| Reviews for Zealous |
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MisterVoorhees chapter 10 . 7/6 Please make a comeback I really enjoyed this story! |
Reaperdan81 chapter 7 . 6/30 Your view of Nami is ,she is not the kind of person that would sleep around for no reason other than pleasure,how did you get that view ?,she is a you even watched one piece ,because you seem to be clueless. |
Reaperdan81 chapter 10 . 5/13 And it just ended ,we didn’t even get to the damn boss fight. |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/28 Hancock is a not interested in boa Hancock at all so won’t waste my time |
Guest chapter 10 . 12/24/2019 And we’re done |
Guest chapter 9 . 12/24/2019 If Hancock is in it I’m glad there is only 1 chapter left |
Guest chapter 8 . 12/24/2019 If shanks cut the fruit with a knife the knife would get the fruits power |
Guest chapter 7 . 12/24/2019 Luffy and robin are not a perfect match made in one piece heaven at all ,robin is an awesome character, but her and luffy do not match you just want to use her in a perverted way , which is fine , just don’t chat shit |
Guest chapter 5 . 12/24/2019 Halfway and nothing has happened yet, another story where luffy has an incredible fruit but it goes nowhere , oh well time to find another story |
Guest chapter 10 . 5/4/2019 So weak willed. How do people take the only trait that these main characters have... and constantly stomp it on the ground... |
Crusherman5 chapter 10 . 6/28/2018 have you abandoned this |
robertastarcris11 chapter 10 . 4/1/2018 PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE YOUR STORY UPDATE REALLY |
Battlesny chapter 4 . 12/17/2017 I think I must know Nami too well. when she didn't get eaten by the sea king I thought I read 'Her purse was still beating way to fast' |
Battlesny chapter 1 . 12/17/2017 first things I'm seeing are definitely Blackbeard eats Yami Yami no Mi before Shanks brings his fruit to Foosha village, and Coby was taken by Alvida obtains get cabin boy years sooner than otherwise. |
ChronoMitsurugi chapter 1 . 10/15/2017 Hold on. Blackbeard doesn't get the Yami Yami no Mi until after Luffy sets out to sail at 17. So this is AU right? |