interesting idea. I'd love to read more.

Great read - and writing. This is exactly what I was looking for!
Please post the other chapters... :)

More please! Need fiction like this to be able to survive the loooonnggg hiatus.

yes it was good. keep going.

Good story! Please upload more!

I like this a lot, and I'm really interested to see where you're going with it.

I really enjoyed your spin on this! Lovely job my dear, definitely need to see the other chapters! Don't torture us more than we already are waiting for February. That's just cruel! Seriously though, super job, keep it up. xo

This is great! I think you captured their characters very well. I doubt Weller could resist her, even if he knows something is going on. And the Jane's tension us just palpable and I really felt for her! You really make the reader feel her anxiety and I just hope Weller can protect her from whatever comes and whatever guilt she piles upon herself.
I love it and keep my fingers crossed that you'll find the time and inspiration to continue this.

I love it! Can't wait for more :)

Good... Continue!

Please don't stop with this chapter! It's so well written!

My God. This was painfully amazing. I think you did a great job of writing something pretty believable for these characters. Poor Jane!

Amazing!

OMG! This is absolutely glorious! I cannot believe you were nervous about posting this! You absolutely have to post the next chapters!

This is so good, you definitely should keep going!