Holy crap; congrats on the transplant! Don't worry about the story or leaving it unfinished at all; I for one very much enjoyed it, and I'm just glad to hear that you're alright!

Thanks for updating. I'm sorry to hear about your health but I'm glad to know you got through it

Thank you for writing this story, its nice to see things changed up every once in a while. And you remained true to your fellow followers as well, your a great writer/author. Glad that your out of the hospital safe and sound. You not being able to continue the story any longer is okay, just focus on life and try to make the best of it. Even if it seems tiring or like you want to give up, don't let your problems get the best of you. Stay DETERMINED :)

I'm happy to see this, not because of the story itself, but because it means your okay. I was getting so worried, I was really scared for you, so seeing this update today made me feel so much better. I'm terribly sorry about what happened! It sounds so scary...
So, does this mean it's over? I'm sorry, but I had a hard time understanding from your notes if the story was stopping here.
Regardless, it was a great run and I'm sorry that the fic affects your PTSD now. May you go on happy and fine!

so you made sans rip off little mermaid but with a bad ending

OMFG ur saying that was alphys
! be more descriptive i thought it was monster child

Have you... Given up on this story? It was so good! So many questions are unanswered, who is 03-H (I imagine their name is Helvetica) who is one? (I'm guessing either an imaginary friend or mettaton)

Ooohhh the suspense! Great cliffhanger! I love your story so, so, much! A lot of people either shy away from the angst or dive too deep into it with these stores. You have the perfect amount, heart crushing, but not enough to make someone cry the day away. I love how Alphys just shows up every once in a while, with no real explanation on HOW she gets down there. It's adorable and terrifying. And the food! I love the grey block idea and how Alphys brings them food. Speaking of Alphys thank you for having Sans use plural pronouns until Alphys said "she". I wish the US as a whole would do that, it's refreshing and just makes sense. I like your mystery "One" person! Are they another one of Gaster's experiments or–gasp–one of his followers? Or Grilby's brother? Or an OC?! OR FRISK!? I like how every once in a while you go into Alphys viewpoint. Also, oh my god you ARE FREAKING AMAZING AT INTERNAL CONFLICT AND EMOTIONS AND HOW ON EARTH DO YOU WRITE SO WELL?! And the Twenty-One-Piolets references! I screamed when I saw them! LOVE THAT BAND! Just–This is great. I love this AU and you did it justice! I really enjoy your quirks and writing style! Please continue the story it is AMAZING! Although I do wish you went into other characters viewpoints a little more often, and had a little more back story... But it's your story and your doing great with it. *shrugs* Do whatever you think helps you. Also why is Gaster so emotionless? Did something happen or was he always like that? (btw love how he isn't a skel) Does he have any lab assistance to help him out? Doesn't he have cameras everywhere...at least in his lab? Did he want to kill Sans earlier despite Sans being–as you said– "his best experiments"? ...OH MY GOD DOES HE HAVE OTHER HUMANOID EXPERIMENTS?! What is his goal with Sans and Papyrus? How/Where did they get their names? Is Alphys's mom a workaholic? Why hasn't she hired a baby-sitter? Is there a husband at home or is she a single mother? Doesn't she notice Alphys leaving? Is Alphys in school yet? Did Alphys see anything really scary down in the labs, or has she meet Gaster outside his lab? Where is she planning to take Sans/Papyrus? Side note...I had a crazy thought while reading your story and if you want to use it later it's up for grabs. : ) What if Sans loves ketchup so much because Gaster puts pills and junk in whatever water they get, so Sans only drinks ketchup because he knows it's safe? Anyway just food for thought! I hope you had/have a great day and that your writers block is forced to run through tests until it collapses or blacks out! :D

Please update is such a good story pleeeeeeeeasssssss

I hope your OK! Great chapter!

Yes. Yes he's meant to succeed
He's just..uh..
He's just not there yet.
Ok that box is impossible
That story reminded me of The Little Mermaid..

Okay then. Take the time you need to write!

*tense* Oh, I do not like the implications of this. He's gone and put Sans in solitary confinement again, hasn't he? Damnit, Sans is going to go mental. *quietly hoping that if Sans is in solitary that Alphys will find him and keep the brothers somewhat connected* Also, I'm still wondering about who 'H' is. *refuses to call them by the number* Besides that... the box is going to drive /me/ mental.

I'm loving this story, you have a really good style that keeps making me want to read more. Keep up the great work!

Hmmmm...how to open the box...

I hope you get better! You're to fab to be sick! DX

I have a suggestion. Please keep in mind that this is only a suggestion. The madder Sans becomes at the scientist, the more his magic acts up. The more his magic acts up, the stronnger and madder he becomes. I think you get where i'm going with this. (Just in case you don't, he refuses to be a puppet and breaks free. With Papyrus of course.) Thanks for your time. :3

~Nyx.