I liked the chapter!

so interesting! wish you'll update it :D

You've put a lot more effort into characterization, have the "conflict" part down, and are addressing the 6 year difference, so I think this story has become worthy of subscribing too :)

Kinda write this to tell you, Please continueee .. Reasons:

1. It is a good story, while it don't feel like a deep story with heavy political plot. For me it is a good drabble (though i don't know wheather you write it as drabble or not because it is to early to see any plot).

2. The way you write, the description, is already good. It have enough description so that people can imagine what happen or what look like, but enough blanks that the mind will supply the rest of description (usually the description become more awesome).

3. So far, for me there's no problem with tenses. It doesn't mean it is perfect tense (because i'm not good in tenses and not good in realizing what tenses should be used). It is read able.

4. The story length is good for the way you write it. I mean sometimes i find some story that to short, but not drabble (like the person have no idea what to write again). It have good start, middle, and end that feel flowing but not cut forcefully or lengthen forcefully.

Thanks for writing the story :3. It all reasons i can think about why this story better continue. It maybe short, but so you know, kinda the 1st time write a review this long. If there some information that's not suitable with the canon, maybe rewrite the part or make it that in your story the information is like that?

Love the setup chapter it was a great speech would love to know what happens from here and if the adventures are still immortal and if some adventures had loves/friends with the people of the land and if they miss them

When I see North Wen I read Northren... This is interesting tho, I wish you luck!

Good job! Good job indeed.

Though to be honest I was more interested in the siblings' adventures in Wen itself. LH has ultimate potential for meaningful OC characters that who knows? The Author is cool enough a dude to actually include bits and pieces of the fandom.

BTW Faerie gates seem to connect all servers together. Otherwise a certain Keronardo wouldn't have ended up in Kanami's "Journey to the East".