Reviews for Broken
Princessnoir chapter 24 . 1/12
The story is good but there are some spell mistakes
clamche chapter 24 . 11/10/2018
I still think Adrien decided not to go through with it. Or at least that he didn't change much. Just a little time to get some answers. But I like the fact that his final decision isn't outright stated, that each reader is given the freedom to choose for themselves.
That was one epic work done here, congrats on finishing it, and doing it so well!
clamche chapter 23 . 11/10/2018
It's always facsinating to see haw you take some general theme, like "It is wrong to change reality itself", and then transcend it. Add one more dimension to it. Create a more vivid dynamics. Make more in-depth character development.
This fic is only ONE of this. Fight me. It is true. Fundamentally true.
Anyway, I love all the point everyone made. So justifiable, consistent, valid. I was torn (still am, for that matter) whose side is the RIGHT right one, whom to root for. Because Adrien is emotionally compromised; Nino wasn't a part of what had transpired that night at all; Marinette is eager to please; and Tikki is too internched in her age-old philosophy of keeping the balance by non-participation (which, in itself, is morally ambiguous as well).
And really, it all just looks like undoing Plagg's magic this time.
Overall, this fic made me think a lot.
clamche chapter 22 . 11/10/2018
I love the whole Marinette-Sabrina-Alya confrontation to bits. Seriously. The entirety of it. Every gesture, every line.
And all these overflowing emotions of guilt, suspicion, agonizing over the course of the friendly interrogation... I won't tire loving it! Because everyone is onto something here and the conclusions drawn at the end of it are key to the development of the story.
And the Nino-Marinette tidbits of interaction are utterly sweet!
Oh, and Plagg's “You said you understood. I thought you understood.” - that threw my heart into the shredder. I literally broke down with Plagg a little at his acquiescence.
clamche chapter 21 . 11/10/2018
The saddest thing is, that even if Adrien decides to change reality, he'll still retain his memories of what he's done, all the aweful stuff and the guilt and the sorrow. And that's what could drive him mad with time. Plus, with no one else privy to his secret, that'll be all the more...lonesome? Suffocating? Devastating? I firmly belive that changing time/reality generally doesn't fix YOU and does nothing to put out the inner commotion of one's emotioanal state.

But it is true that given the situation he's in, Adrien is rightfully, justifiably tempted to latch onto any chance presented to him to undo his 'mistake'. Main characters aren't immune to making the wrong decision. And even if Adrien does end up following through with it, it'll be entirely reasonable.

Still, that doesn't change my opinion on the matter that knowing and remembering what one is capable of doing or has done, could be that one rotten apple that spoils the bunch (ruins one's happy reality rewrite, in Adrien's case).
clamche chapter 20 . 11/10/2018
Favorite line that stuck with me: “Her heart will tip the scales, and she’ll make the wrong choice. They all will.”
So very profound, so utterly forboding...
Bookwormbybee chapter 24 . 8/25/2018
A wonderful story. I've really enjoyed reading it and crying. You did a lot of cool things with this fic and it was original and intriguing.

Leaving the epilogue open-ended was really cool too. And having Chat!Nino for even the small amount of time was a fun idea.

I was surprised how much you used Sabrina and that was really awesome of you to look into her character more. You don't see people do that much with her in stories so it was nice to see that difference.

so for the lame reviewthere was more I wanted to say but I can't really put it togethet. All in all a really good story. Thank you for sharing it.
Bookwormbybee chapter 23 . 8/25/2018
AHGGG RIGHT IN THE FEELS. Great chapter. I honestly love this idea so much. It's really unique and different.
Bookwormbybee chapter 21 . 8/25/2018
Another awesome chapter.
Bookwormbybee chapter 14 . 8/24/2018
HOLY!% DUDE WHY- WHAT- AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

I'm not sure if I'm screaming in excitement, anger or just all around IDONETEVENKNOW. this is crazy and I think I wanna cry but I'm excited and nervous and poor aDRIEN.

Great chapter. AHHHH! okay ima keep reading now...
Bookwormbybee chapter 10 . 8/24/2018
DANG. Now Nathalie has some suspicions about stuff. I love seeing her be a sort of stand-in parent for Adrien. Is sad that he cant really trust her the way he should be able too. He can't get the help he needs when he's closing up on everyone and it hurts my heart. (T-T)
Bookwormbybee chapter 9 . 8/24/2018
It's rare to see anything from Sabrina's perspective so this was really cool. Nice chapter. Alya's really close to the truth now so this should get very interesting.
Bookwormbybee chapter 8 . 8/24/2018
This chapter really stuck home for me personally.

I can attest to the fact that a listening ear makes all the difference in the world. Even in such a vague sense like this. You don't have to give details to get advice from a parent. Having an honest talk to just let it all out is the first step to changing and healing.

You did an amazing job conveying what you wanted with this chapter. And I salute you for the wonderful job you did.
Bookwormbybee chapter 4 . 8/23/2018
I love this chapter Friendship!Chladrien gets ignored a lot. And I enjoy it when writers take the time to look more in depth at Chloe as a character. Anyway, amazing job with this chapter.
salty nap princess chapter 14 . 8/23/2018
I didn't see this coming. it's always Nino being Shelly so I think this is so creative!
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