| Reviews for Carnival Days |
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Neo Infinity chapter 7 . 1/7/2018 Thanks for letting me know about the poll a completely forgot About it, for the pairing i want is yuzu, ruri and yasaka: YUZU: we all had hope she develop and improve along the story after defeating LDS fusion girl but sadly became a mere damsel in stress while Serena technically took her place as a main heroine plus I'm personally tired off yuya/yuzu pairings that take at least half a story to happen then authors say it happened cause they are childhood friends which really doesn't make sense to me so i choose her hoping that the MC will improve her dueling and character. RURI: I like her guess she's the odd one among the bracelets girls she's mature, patient and little girly while the others are impatient, tomboyish and violent, I had hopes for her to be a new ally but but sadly it never happened two duels as brain washed puppet then got killed by Leo with the other girls and to make it worse ray wasn't really reborn and ONLY yuzu was saved at the end plus yuto is supposed to merge with yuya during the tournament so his pairing with ruri could be Meaningless for the story. YASAKA: she have a nice design and personality but the anime showed her as minor character and her deck made her look like a second version of kotori (zexal), you could create a relationship with her, ruri and MC in XYZ world then send him to standard with amnesia for yuzu or make him born in standard love yuzu first then save ruri and yasaka from prison (and maybe rin since she's in next tower) with Serena or sora help. |
Fear Ripper chapter 5 . 8/30/2017 what about buddyfight? and the precure one sounds nice. |
Guest chapter 4 . 9/15/2016 Just reboot |
CxG chapter 4 . 7/4/2016 When I've read both of parts of this zexal story the one issue I've had with is the part after he lost to kaito as he just seemed to be different then before along with losing his deck but gave up his ace card. So if you were to do a reboot maybe do an evolution instead of tossing one to the side for number 96 |
VoidLing chapter 4 . 7/4/2016 I choose arc v because it gives u more freedom to use any type of extra deck cards plus the action duels, it's up to u on what type of deck ven uses. |
AlexisBaudens chapter 4 . 7/4/2016 I think you should eeprendre zero. after all damage would stop with the promise on the last chapter of "Yu-Gi-Oh Zexal: The Emperor's Regnant" and with all the issues of the arc of Heartland City tournament. |
TwilightKingA5L chapter 4 . 7/4/2016 Half of me wants to see a reboot of this story, but the other half wants to see what you have cooked up for your Arc-V story... it's hard to choose... |
Nirvash Neo chapter 3 . 6/29/2016 May I recommend Kotori use Dark requiem XYZ Dragons and maybe a Dark requiem fairy cheer dragon either during the W.C.D or semi-Finals of the W.D.C (depending on how far she gets in the W.C.D |
WOWS chapter 3 . 3/1/2016 Pls keep updating this story, i love the way you have advanced and evolved the plot. |
Nirvash Neo chapter 2 . 1/28/2016 Why is Number 26 different from the first chapter? |
AlexisBaudens chapter 1 . 1/24/2016 I am a little shocked that Ven is dropped Xyz Rebellion Dark Dragon was his favorite card, and is one of the card that allows him to play one of it's most valuable card. Why you chose it. |
AlexisBaudens chapter 3 . 1/5/2016 Or is it that one can find on your fiction yugioh 5D's ? |
ELOSHAZZY chapter 1 . 12/31/2015 High great chapter but when will you update child of another earth? |
Jackson chapter 2 . 12/26/2015 Is van gonna have his dark rebellion xyz dragon back some day |
GreenD109 chapter 2 . 12/24/2015 Great way to portray Ven's return before that duel with the thug Snake, but you know some part of me think that as the WDC unfolds, his hunting game for the numbers may consume him to the upcoming dark forces ahead. |