This was very sweet. Also funny at some parts. I really liked the plot device you had for Sakura's back story and recovery in Amegakure. The writing was good and even poetic. As a personal preference, I sometimes had a hard time distinguishing who said what dialog. Since in some cases it was a dialog bit that was followed by the action and not the speaker. Also would have liked to see a longer relationship development between Sasori facing his new emotions and Sasori and Sakura's relationship ship. Overall this was a pleasant read. Really liked this Sasori x Sakura story.

very nice

Cute 3

Aww this story was so sad yet sweet.