Oh... Ok then... Might as well delete the story while you're at it. Good luck with whatever you're gonna do instead.

I'll admit, I did have some issues with the story (too many Ds on the crew, for one), but it seems a shame the just drop it altogether. But even if you feel like you wrote yourself into a corner on this one, you shouldn't be so hard on yourself about it. If nothing else, think of it as a learning experience. My first stories were full of silly world-breaking contradictions, and that was long before I joined this site.

Are you fucking kidding me? Come on, people are still reading this. You have over a hundred reviews, and are constantly going to have more people who read this and want more. Besides, right in the middle of a fight is the worst possible place to end it.

PTSD... That's some serious shit, bro...

Until I read that at the end of the chapter, I was wondering how a jellyfish could look male... But it was a fishman. I would suggest going in and making it more clear that he's a fishman, and not a man standing on a jellyfish.

I still say his initial reason to fight her was bullshit.

Akojii could NOT have frozen Akainu, just saying. At Marineford, the ice was clearly melted by the lava, and I believe at one point Akojii was shown with one leg made of ice. Only Akainu could've done such permanent damage, considering that it wasn't Ace. Therefore, this Frazil woman would never be able to freeze lava.

But it's the same bird! How can it not be him?! Is it someone else from Skypiea?

Well, Itu is certainly stronger than Ray (assuming we ignore the zoan half), if there's no doubt about him beating Frazil. That should certainly have an effect on Ray's bounty after this is over with.

Complete and utter defeat...

Awwww. :(

I really enjoyed reading this story despite how 'horrible' you called it. Its humor and adventure was refreshing, and the update rate that you had been keeping up was insane to the point that I wanted to worship you.

Well, if you ever decide to make another SYOC fanfiction again, do inform me. I'll be the first one submitting. ;)

And NEVER think that your fanfiction is horrible. I admit it has its plot holes, but fanfiction is all about growing and you should be proud of how much you've written. Your writing style and the overall flow between scenes has increased dramatically from the beginning of this story, and I'm sure that you'll continue to improve.

Anyways, thanks for writing this story. :) Every moment has been a blast, although I admit I was failing at reviewing at times. Ha. Ha.

Amazing work.

Sugar Daddy... I dont even have to tell you why that's a horrible name...

...Really? If you want him to fight a Warlord, at least give him a better reason. By this logic, he wants to kill Mihawk, Buggy, Kuma, and Boa Hancock as well. Something tells me he doesnt though, which completely invalidates his reason to go after this one.

Random. So much random...

...The fuck. So his dad let him become a slave, didn't do shit to help, then waited until he became a pirate with a bounty and his own crew, then sent some mercenary type to go collect him, just for some stupid wedding... Parenting goals. Truly, the greatest father in history.