| Reviews for Body and Soul |
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   Araytigre chapter 4 . 2/19 Sadly, and obviously, RL must have raised it's foul head in order to sidetrack your Muse,so I can only hope that you can find the correct potion, spell, curse, or combination thereof in order to to be able to continue this Fun story, I do like their forms, even the Twin's. Harry's Hawk form will fit in well with Fleur, lol. Thank You. TTFN |
| darkworkangel chapter 4 . 8/21/2018 i like this when are you updating it |
| Sageofchaos chapter 4 . 3/20/2018 hope to read more. |
| aidann83 chapter 4 . 10/31/2017 I think this story is dead... but if it's not PLZ CONTINUE I NEED THIS IN MY LIFE! |
| tigertail13 chapter 1 . 10/29/2017 Just finished all 4 chapters and I really hope you continue this story. I love the way you're writing it |
| Scabbers1957 chapter 4 . 9/11/2017 A very original story plot, please keep up the good work. I'll add this to my story alerts to see what happens next. :)) |
| T-B-R chapter 4 . 3/21/2017 This is a fantastic story, I really hope you continue it. |
| icecold1039 chapter 4 . 10/7/2016 This fic seems to have an annoying amount of misspellings. |
| ElementalMaster16 chapter 4 . 9/21/2016 pretty awesome fic so far! i quite like your take on the side-effects of the potion :) PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_) |
| Karou WindStalker chapter 4 . 7/28/2016 Interesting story, so far. Could use a bit of polish, and a spell / grammar check, but it's not the worst I've seen. Hope you continue this. |
| Pathseekerme chapter 4 . 7/21/2016 Wow! This is great! The forms for each person were each well thought out and the fact that Ron is now an Animagus that is a vegetarian is hysterical! I LOVED it! I also thought Hermione's form was well chosen; that poison might very well be a last chance life-saving option for their team, or the. twins might make a grenade-style weapon with the poison as a main component within it. It would be really great if Harry could then weapon in his bird form! Safely, of course! Seriously, you did a wonderful job and I am looking forward to more-have already favorite and followed this story as always. I have to say, I am definitely a fan of your work; thank you for sharing your word-crafting talent with us! |
| sarah-rose76646 chapter 4 . 7/4/2016 Spelling mistakes. Too many spelling mistakes. Please get a beta reader to proof read the chapter before posting it. |
| Jeremyjet chapter 3 . 6/27/2016 Cool |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/21/2016 The first chapter of Harry changing and learning to fly are good, but the plot with Ron, Hermione, Fred and George is boring. I was hoping for the Fleur plot to start immediatly, escpecially with 'Soul' in your fictions title. Harry could have felt a pull, fly to Fleur and shagged her rotten out of animal/bird/magic instinct ala love at first sight. But you didn't even mention her in the 4 chapters. Was not a wasted read, but I hoped for more. |
| Fencer22 chapter 4 . 6/12/2016 Interesting so far though you might want to put more time into editing before you post. |
