| Reviews for A Priestess and Her Guardian |
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Crisellea chapter 1 . 8/6 I like how the story begins! Excited for the next chapters |
Yagi chapter 5 . 8/3/2019 I know this is probably dead by now but I honestly loved this so much hn its very cute. Have a nice day! |
kansa chapter 5 . 4/18/2019 Lol! This story is a lot of fun! I like the alternative backstory that still mirrors the original plot. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
nancyricoleon chapter 5 . 6/26/2018 Me gusta mucho tu historia |
Akrim chapter 5 . 4/22/2018 Omg this story is truly amazing. Love the concept and writing style and everything really! |
Lifesend chapter 5 . 2/17/2018 I’m really enjoying this story here! It has an intriguing plot! Please continue ! |
Porpoisepower chapter 1 . 2/1/2018 Good first chapter. It could use more descriptive elements. For example more details on Akane's disease. You don't need to name it, but more details on the symptoms, would have helped. I'm not requesting you do this... but if the Tendos and the Saotome's had the physical forms of forest animals, say Tanukis. And they end up on some sort of war the level of Pom Poko it would be amazing. In fact... let me know if you don't go this route... I might be tempted to do it myself :D :D |
Vernica chapter 5 . 1/26/2018 Me encantó el detalle que ranma tuvo para akane solo para hacerla felíz. Qué bueno que actualizaste, me gusta leer tu historia y ya quiero ver cuáles serán las actividades de akane como sacerdotisa |
PurseMonger chapter 5 . 1/24/2018 Awesome chapter! The first interaction with Kuno was spot on and good job finding a way for Nabiki to continue getting money from Kuno. I really liked their interaction in the morning and Ranma remembering the flowers. He’s much more thoughtful in this fic than in cannon. |
jdcocoagirl chapter 5 . 1/23/2018 this was fun to read. |
nancyricoleon chapter 4 . 1/18/2018 me gusta mucho tu historia |
PurseMonger chapter 4 . 1/16/2018 Great chapter. I really enjoyed the action and them bonding. It’s great to see Akane mixing it up and taking down some demons. It looks like they’re bonding and trying to get along. So if Akane is half divine because of Soun, wouldnt Nabiki and Kasumi be as well? So they would have no issue visiting in the in between. |
crusincloud chapter 4 . 1/16/2018 I love how your story is the same as the original yet so different. I cant really explain. I also love how Ranma and Akane have a place of their own. It will help them to connect to each other without any distractions. Im really really glad i found your story. I love Ranma 1/2 since I was young and now many years later, i still look for fanfics to read, to satisfy my thirst for a different and happier ending. Hope you update soon! |
Vernica chapter 4 . 1/16/2018 Es genial que hayas podido actualizar tan rápido, me llenas de esperanza para ver la historia completa. Jaja Me gustó mucho el capítulo, se nota que las cosas se pondrán interesantes a partir de ahora. |
elechan chapter 4 . 1/16/2018 Hello! I just came across your story and I felt in love with it. I usually don't start reading unfinished stories unless something catches my interest but here I am. I wish you would continue your writing. I started a few stories years ago that I want to finish someday, but the muse is completely gone for now, so I understand that sometimes is beyond ourselves to take the story to its rightful end. Having said that, your writing is fantastic and I am really interested in the events so far and how you might introduce the rest of the characters. I will be waiting to read new chapters if you decide to keep posting. Hope to read more from you soon! |