Reviews for make it right
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 2/11
This is wonderful. It fixes the tragedy of Killian killing his father for me as a reader. I loved that Emma understood Liam so readily and then she didn’t push him. I loved what she said to Killian to encourage him without making promises they couldn’t keep. And I love the conclusion. Thanks for writing.
andria chapter 1 . 4/5/2016
this was so good I hope we see this on the show it was perfect
Peacockgirl chapter 1 . 3/4/2016
Ah! This is perfect! I love how Emma sees herself in Liam and these two eventually raise him and David's "You have two brother named Liam" comment. It's all just so beautiful and perfect!
emmas-prince chapter 1 . 1/14/2016
Omg you are a monster! That story had me almost crying my eyes out! You are mean! But you write so so well, thank you for making this. I didn't know I wanted a Liam Jr./Killian story until I read this! Great work!
a.touch.eclectic chapter 1 . 12/9/2015
This is just what needs to happen! Thank you for a beautifully written story!
Alwaystrue2CS chapter 1 . 12/9/2015
THIS IS UTTER PERFECTION! 33 beautiful. When did you start writing? You must have written really quickly. Great job with character development and dialogue! Very creative. I honestly have so many more compliments to give, but I'll, reluctantly, shut up.
swishandflickwit chapter 1 . 12/9/2015
This is the first fic I read with Liam II and I have NO REGRETS. This is... so, so realistic. I love that it isn't all flowers and rainbows, that Liam was upset. God, I saw so much of Killian and even Emma in him in that moment when he stormed out on Killian in the orphanage, only fortified when you wrote Emma feeling the same because an orphan's an orphan :(( I love how you wrote Emma, subtlety really ISN'T her strong suit and you portrayed that perfectly. Then that story Liam mentioned about Brennan calling him Killian... jfc, I started crying. That makes so much sense that Papa Jones would slip like that and for Liam to remember and then everything clicking into place... Oh god, WHY MUST I HAVE EMOTIONS?

And of course, that last line SLAYED me. I'd love for you to write more! I love how you wrote Liam II and would be SO DOWN with you writing more moments between the Jones brothers. Like, Killian telling Liam II about Liam I? That would be brilliantly painful, haha!

Either way, this was lovely and perfectly written. I adore it. :)
maeyourskiesbeblue chapter 1 . 12/8/2015
I loved everything about this. And I want this to happen so bad on the show. I'd love to see more in this verse! I'd love to see that slow bond begin to grow between Liam and Killian.
Lisa1972 chapter 1 . 12/8/2015
*sniffle* *sniffle*
EmmyLou74 chapter 1 . 12/8/2015
I loved it. Poor Killian. Poor Liam.
belovedbrat chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
loved this. Much needed fluff and happiness after Sunday's heart wrenching episode.
Once Upon a Whim chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
Warm fuzzies! I love this. Thanks for writing it so well and so quickly. If Liam part deux is out there somewhere, it has to go this way in the actual sore, right? They can't just leave it hanging like that...

I'd love more details about Liam staying, if you were so inclined... :)
jennyb311 chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
Love it! But I want more.
clockadile chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
Thank you! This was exactly the sortof optimistically fluffy fic I needed this morning!
Anna chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
I didn't know I needed this until I read it! You should definitely continue it. I think that if it happens in Ouat, it'll be totally like this. thanks for writing it.
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