Reviews for 500 Days
Zepper chapter 1 . 4/5/2016
Sorry to post another review, but I can't edit my other one :P I noticed this, and I figured I should bring it to your attention: Oikawa (or the narrator, at least) thinks that Sawa's first time saying "I love you" without any sort of encouragement from Oikawa happens on day 274; however, she says it by herself, without being prompted to, on day 124 at the space museum.

I loved this story more than I can say. It felt very realistic, rather than idealistic. This really fits the tone of Oikawa, I think, because in the anime he seems to have an inferiority complex. We never get what we deserve, no matter how hard we try XD It was awesome seeing him and Sawa try to deal with life; I thought their personalities complemented each other really well.

Again, thank you so much for posting this! I'm glad that I had the opportunity to read it.
Zepper chapter 6 . 4/4/2016
Thank you so much for uploading this. I loved every second of it.
quiet-sublimity chapter 6 . 3/13/2016
Wow, that was frankly awesome.
I don't have a lot to say and it's pretty late, but ... yeah, your writing is really fluid and nice to read, and the structure is really interesting, I like how different it is, since the fragments aren't in chronological order ... Plus, you made Tooru very interesting. Congrats !
zhiell chapter 6 . 3/12/2016
I absolutely love this. One of the few stories that made my heart anticipate the next moments. I like the format too. I am waiting for Late Bloom as well.
Yuu Annoya Me chapter 1 . 2/21/2016
i just finished reading chapter 5 and i was all 'why the HELL is this fic not popular?!' well that's just me. (my thoughts on the fifth chapter will be posted later when i get home)

anywho, this is a really really really great fic okay. the characterization of tooru didn't make me want to bash his face in. Sawa-chan is just a really complex character who's not restricted in a stereotype.

the one thing that both amazed and erked(?) me was the date format. It's great to not be linear but I was confused when i miss the underlined days and read day 30 something after reading day 300 (i think). ehh who cares tho, it's your story. do whatever you want with it.

regardless of my above comment, it's an interesting format which is very eye catching. I like how it doesn't necessarily start at the very beginning but it didn't leave their first meeting in the air since you did tackle their first meeting somewhere down the line.
indieripples chapter 4 . 1/12/2016
Oh my god. This chapter...POOR SAWA :( getting drugged by her old friends (I presume they're from Shiratorizawa?) and falling for the same tricks again. Ketamine alcohol not a good mix Dx and I really enjoyed the fact that you didn't write Kuroo off as dangerous or whatever you mentioned in your note! It was fun to see the police's (viewer's) perception of him vs. the actual him. Him taking college classes in Tokyo was a nice touch too :D Did you get that from his Wiki page? Good addition.

Also, I felt really sorry for Oikawa in this chapter. Seems like something happens with her grandfather that causes her to run away and get drunk (or fall back into old habits?)? Will be interesting to see what actually happens, and how you develop Oikawa's relationship with jii-chan :( Sawa might be "too good" for him but he's trying his best, you know!

AND THE KISS. I squeuled when I read that D; Even though I think you imply they've already had sex with each other in another chapter (might have to go back and check), the kiss was such a nice send-off.

I'm sad you're going to end this story soon, but I suppose it makes sense since it's called "500 Days" and there's only so many days left...wonder what'll happen with their relationship, especially with how you built it up in the first chapter.
indieripple chapter 3 . 1/12/2016
Ahhhh! The tension. I love the time skip here and it's cool to see how their relaitonship develops over time. Even if it's just little snippets. So there's skirting the weird boundary between friendship and relationship huh? Seems like Sawa's the one who wants to keep it friends but Oikawa wants something more? Or maybe just a casual relationship? Hmm... ALSO that moment when Sawa tells him she believes in him. SO CUTE. And the way Iwaizumi reacts is so in character.
indieripple chapter 2 . 1/12/2016
Ah, Sawa is so cute! I thought she was gonna be a cute lil tsuntsun at first but the way you've developed her definitely puts her in a more unique category. She's no nonsense, which is a perfect contrast to Oikawa. On to the next!
indieripple chapter 1 . 1/12/2016
Ah, refreshing start. I love the format and can't wait to see what you do with it. :D
Error Code 401 chapter 4 . 1/11/2016
I'm going to curl up in a hole and cry now. Bye-bye, cruel, cruel, author-chan.
miya ojousama chapter 2 . 12/20/2015
Heeey thank you for sharing your work with us, it really is wonderful.
I must say i really like your story (well the 2 chapters that have been posted til now), you writing style is quite nice,not boring in the least, it s captivating, gives you a reason to keep reading, well that s thanks to the good plot too, which til now is really lovely i find that you amazingly kept oikawa in character (which we all thank you for since we all love oikawa right),and the completely opposite personnality(strict,non-bullshit-taking, and the fact that she came for THE shiratorizawa and has some kind of past? With ushijima) of the oc fits well with oikawa s, oh and also the little bit of timeskip keeps us motivated
Overall your fanfic is lovely and i ll be waiting for more.
Apsudesu chapter 1 . 12/14/2015
OH MY GOD! I love you! This story is something that i've been looking for a while! Pleasepleaseplease continue with this! I reeally like the funny moments but the best scenes are the fluffy ones :)
Holy Holly chapter 2 . 12/14/2015
THIS WAS SUPER CUTE TOO. Oikawa the failing student! Wonder what part Ushijima plays into this. Otherwise, looks like an interesting story! You write Oikawa really well, and Sawa is just a lovable mess (wondering about her backstory like why did she transfer to Aobajosai from Shiratorizawa?) Update soon please!
Holy Holly chapter 1 . 12/14/2015
THIS IS SO CUTE. I love the format, and I love your take on Oikawa. I can realistically see him saying most of these things, and Sawa is SUPER cute too. On to the next chapter!
Error Code 401 chapter 2 . 12/13/2015
Ushikawa . . . whatthefreakingheckwhywhywhywhyareyousocrueltousfangirls?! XD Good chapter!
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