Not what I expected but what is needed. You have a different insight to their relationship. A good insight. Also your descriptive abilities as to Chuck describing her inner beauty is wonderful. This coming from previous stories. Wonder how your bio you’ll describe yourself?

Excellent liked it very much. Was nice to see Chuck take the leap and face any possible recriminations from action rather than inaction.

I'd actually read this before and it wasn't till i got to the part about the bike and the little girl that i realised i'd already read it, but i thought, what the heck, let's read it again because it's a well written one shot, not fluffy or cheesy, i do like the inclusion of the young friends story, because life is full of regrets and if it's to late, you can't get it back, it just helps you to not make that mistake again.

I tend to read reviews before a story and if you do, i recommend you read this, it's really good as is the other stories from this writer that i've read so far.

This is a great little story. Very well done!

That was (to coin a phrase) awesome!

Quite an emotional moment. Your attention to detail of the moment demonstrates why I enjoy Chuck. Thanks!

Brings a tear to the eye. I haven't read anything else from you yet but you're now on the list.
Thanks for writing

A very nicely told story, packed full of emotion in that small of a word count is impressive.

Great display of emotion through your story. Thank you.

I really enjoyed your story

This is a fantastic little one shot. One I can easily see being in canon but we got so few intimate moments between Chuck and Sarah in those earlier seasons. You wrote Chuck so well in this fic and I loved the lack of dialogue, somehow it made everything seem more poignant. Great, great stuff! A very unique little fic that I sincerely enjoyed. Thank you.

What a great story! It really reminded me of fanfiction written during season 1 that I have read. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you.

Great story.

Really great and important story in that universe. Loved it.

That was terrific!
Its not hard to imagine such a situation occurring. Makes me wish they'd been more willing to give us tender moments early on in canon...