I absolutely loved this story it was tender and beautiful. The only thing that I disliked was the sexual part. I feel like it was a bit uncalled for. I think it should focus more on the way that Emma is still unsure about the babying. Maybe gold could even shrink her down. But that is only my opinion. I'd still read this even if didn't change it it's just that I think you should. This story was well written. Well done.l applaud you.

Good chapter can you write more please?

I like this. I need more pretty please! :D

Why the h.e.l.l would Emma want a creep like Gold as a Daddy when she has a wonderful father? That's just stupid.